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This story is amazing!
I come here everyday looking for updates.
It's really well written out and had an interesting plot.
ooo, gothic kid *licks lips*
although I still prefer Jacob with Pheonix :)
I look forward to your next update!!

*lol* I knew it! Yaay! Hmmm... jealosy-trip on the rise? Aaaannnd... since you missed last week, does that mean you'll update two days in a row now?! *grins hopefully* No? Ah, damn... ;o)This is my fav story on here right now... *hugs it*

Dang! This chapter was sparkling from beginning to end. Jacob and Miranda are great together. Miranda is so funny. I kind of wish I could give Jacob to her as a giant teddy bear. ( I am sure Jacob does not agree). I am so happy that Russell is his secret admirer. I hope he and Jacob will go back to Russell's room and do all kinds of naughty things together. I think Jacob deserves a little loving after dealing with Miranda and listening to Phoenix and Felicity go at it. Thanks for this hilarious chapter. I hope you feel better soon.

Ahahahahahaha. Russel. Somehow I'm inbetween feeling slightly creeped out by him and wanting him to jump Jacob. And have him be used to make Phoenix jealous. Because a jealous Phoenix for good reason is a good Phoenix. Or bad Phoenix in Jacob's case... something like that. UPDATE SOON!

Chapter 17

This story never disappoints!!!
(Except I'd like the chapters to be
ten times longer!!! HA!) Even the baby sittings scene is hysterical!!!
Jacob is so funny!!! Feeding that kid that crappy food!!!! O-M-G!!!
(I'm having a super time with each of these chapters!!! So thanks I hope
your summer's going well!!!

Thanks!
R

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So Russell is Mirandas brother and the secret admirer,I knew it...that`s hot:)
I bet Phoenix won`t be so happy about that.I can`t undertstand,why he`s calling Jacob a whore ore
a slut,when he is the one cheating on his wife constantly.Poor Felicity,and poor Jacob.
Miranda is really a handful and a little bit premature,groping Jacobs ass...hihi.
Please update soon,Jules

Hope you're feeling better! If it's any consolation, you write extremely well for someone who's sick! Yikes! Who knew that creeper Russell would be the secret admirerer? I don't think I spelled that right...Anyways....jeez, what's Jacob gonna do now since he's not "allowed" to do anything w/anyone besides that psycho Phoenix? You had me cracking up! I can just picture Miranda playing with Jacob's hair and putting barretts in it and pony tails! Everytime I used to babysit a girl, she would always play with my hair!! Hey, and commenting about the dinner: isn't beef stew better than Mickey D's???????

I'm reading it as long as you don't do a 'fuck it nobody's reviewing new anymore so I'm not doing any more chapters' thingie

email here shidoken6@yahoo.com for updates so I don't forget randomly.

I'm just reading it slowly...like everything else since I have no internet or computer...yet.

so far I'm in the starting point and it's good.

keep it up

Thank you for this last chapter. I love how Phoenix is being kinda sweet to Jacob. I mean, in Phoenix-language. It seems like as much as Jacob is trying to hide how he really feels, Phoenix is picking up on it anyway, and making sure Jacob knows about it. I am biting my nails about how the story will end... Can they be together, once Jacob graduates and the deal is up? And I love the pairing and personally want them to be together forever, but how will that work with the prudish wifey (who I also love too much to want to be rid of?). I have to say, Felicity is one of my favorite female characters to get wrapped up in this whole thing. Prude, but not unaware or haughty about it. And with a great sense of humor. I loved that she barely even batted an eye when she caught Jacob with his pants around his ankles in the living room.
And I was on pins and needles wondering if Phoenix would catch Jacob. But he only partially did, and smutty punishment ensued regardless!

OMG, Munez, you are SO fucking funny! "I'd snap your neck and probably fuck you until you weren't warm anymore". OMG, hysterical!!!!! This is such a fucking awesome story!!!!! I'm so disappointed I finished the last chapter! I can't wait for the next update!!!!! You should seriously consider writing as a career; you are FANTASTIC!!! Could you pls. email me when you have an update: LisaT25@msn.com. Thank you!!!!