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Too bad Miranda had to interrupt but she is so darn cute! I forgive her. I know that Russell will probably get his heart broken in the end but I think Jacob should go for it. If only to torture Phoenix with the idea. I don't think Phoenix was expecting to hear about that cock piercing. Poor Jacob is going to pay later for his transgressions. I really like Russell. It seems that both he and Jacob could benefit from spending some quality time together. They seem to have a lot in common. This plot twist is so interesting. i can't wait for the next chapter.

Yessssssss. UPDATED! My random pairing is Phoenix/Russel ahahaha... no, that would be too weird. Russel... seems so sweet. And creepy. And idk. I do feel kind of bad that his role is to piss Phoenix off beyond belief but, uh, what can you do? Nothing. And Trent/Jacob isn't that weird. I get it! And I thought it was really sweet when Russel said he didn't want just sex from him. And the COCK PIERCING ahahahaha Phoenix is gonna kill him~ after fucking him senseless of course.

HILARIOUS.Jacob's tendancy to attarct every psycho makes me laugh to no end.Your dialogs as usual are a real delight.GREAT WORK !!!

Ohhh god. I can't wait for the next chapter.
You're a fucking genius, dear. I think I love you.

Something I forgot to say in my excitement while rushing to review:
I love that this is the only thing I'm currently reading that I don't already know the end of. Everything else I read, I feel like I know the ending by the time I've read the first chapter... but with this... I NEVER have any idea what's going to happen next... and it's so exciting.
Have I said this before? I've probably mentioned it... /bad memory.

Hope he test drives Russell soon... though looking forward to the suprise from Phoenix ^_^

Awww... lovely! *grins at Phoenix* About pairings, I'm sorry, but I haven't had NEARLY enough of Phoenix/Jacob yet, to even be ale to think of others.... Oh, I have a feeling I'm going to love the next chapter... *grin* Can it be next week soon? *checks calender* Oh, damn... still a week away...

Gah!!!!!!!! I thought I'd hate Felicity but she seems nice in a very preppy cheerleader sort of way. I'm not sure I really like Phoenix. I mean I do, but gah he's confusing and Russell seems to be a Phoenix in the making. I love Jacob's character though. This story really hooked me in and I think I'm just a little ( a lot) bit addicted to it. Lawlz.

Awwww, I really hope you get better soon! >< Being sick any time of the year sucks major monkeys... BTW, Awesome update ^_^ I was so shocked to find out that Goth Boy is the guy who wrote that note! =O and he's smexy too. lol Can't wait to see what they "talk" about when they get back from McDonalds... *blinks innocently*

Hi again!
That was really good. I liked it as I always do, but I'm specifically excited for Russel. Surprise? hah. I had a feeling that it may have been him but I felt bad for Jacob if that was the case because Tori's going to be really upset about it, therefore probably all his friends'll be upset about it and then it might just be him and Russel.

That's, of course, not to mention the Phoenix reaction we know's gonna come, but I know it's going to have to because Jacob's pretty hard up at the moment as we saw from his dream.

I really don't think babysitting's the dream job for our intrepid hero. It's also lucky that Phoenix has a cook, otherwise we may not have a hero t'all.

Waiting for the next chapter again. Can't wait!

-Renny