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by Munez

schedule July 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Renny Monster want more porn!

I haven't seen you post in a while and I miss it lots, then I realized I hadn't been reviewing in a while. So I hoped if one came the other would follow, so here goes.

I love Russel. I love him. I want Jacob to suck his cock then ride it. I want that. I think I'll want that in my stocking for Christmas. That'd be nice to have and hold for always and forever and I like it, and his tattoo. I love his tattoo. The piercing might be cool, but the tattoo's better. I love it. A lot if you couldn't tell.

When Phoenix isn't happy I'm really happy. That's how it goes, because when Phoenix isn't happy he decides then is the time to fuck...and I like that. It's a good personality trait, and though all this characters currently or will eventually need psychiatric help...that's one particular trait I'd like to hope they wouldn't try to "Cure" away.

Excited as always to read the next chapter! Looking forward to it!

-Renny
person Anon
schedule July 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oooh, I can't wait for the next chapter. Phoenix and Jacob... yessss. I love that Phoenix is getting all jealous and possessive!
person Valentine
schedule July 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Arghhhh i love this story!!!
god phoenix is such a psycho... but that just makes it hotter somehow ^.^

can i ask how often you tend to update?? im excited for the next one, ya see

much love x
schedule June 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG, you are hysterical!!!! "He spread like extra creamy peanut butter"!!! I was ROFL, so hard! How do you come up w/these things?????? Great chapter, but bad mistake telling them about the cock piercing! Jacob's gonna get it tonight! (No pun intended). Shit, poor Jacob, he finally finds someone he likes and now Phoenix is gonna ruin it for him. Too bad he seems obsessed w/Phoenix also. I will be glued to the computer anxiously awaiting the next update!!!!!
person Anon
schedule June 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
omg the last chapter was the shit
more!
person DarkSacrifice
schedule June 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Omg...YES you finally updated..and omg such a hot update also..
JebusXD I love RussellxD and I love Phoenix and his kind of toy-obsession!!
Omg but the next update sounds promisingXD and you stoppedXD njawwwXD
Anyways I love your stories! I Think I've read all your stories so far...but I don't know if I had left a review..
I really hope you will update soon!
this story owns! and I love all your characters !XD and I love where the story is leading is nowXD
please update soon!!
person Anon
schedule June 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i liked this chapter....
it was .... weird...
so...
keep the weirdness going!
update quickly!
person JulesGer
schedule June 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
huhu,
Yeahhh,go Russell,go...
I really like this crazy dude and I think,that he is exactly what Jacob needs!
Stupid Phoenix,only thinks of Jacob as a toy,pardon, his favourite toy...phö.
He always takes what he wants from Jacob,that`s not fair.He deserves some blue balls...
But I knew he would be jealous....hihi.I bet Jacob is in for a rough night.
JACOB LOCK YOUR DOOR!
Please update soon,Jules

person animekid
schedule June 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm reading, but still slow as hell; I'm actually behind only two chapters >w<

I'll give a better review again uh next part

Still an interesting story...dunno what else to say about it? Awesome? That's even more hokey! ><
person Rosei
schedule June 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Really like Jacob's new beau. He picks the bi-guys and they
can really pick the,"submissives with a big mouth"
out of the crowd!!!

Still really liked that poem,

‘Roses are red
My balls are blue
Sugar is sweet
I want to fuck you’

That was hilarious!!!
Thanks!
R