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by Munez

schedule August 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
So ... I hate Phoenix, I think I like Pilot's crazy ass, but I absolutely adore Russell! Yet, I can see myself rooting for Jacob to be with all three of them - but mostly Russell.
This story is fantastic.
Thanks for writing.
schedule August 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
omg. omg. omg. ::flails in protest::
I don't know if I can stand to be left hanging there!
I'm DYING for the next update already!!
person JT.
schedule August 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 19 - Ahahahaha. Goddamn. I fucking love you, Phoenix. Still fucking him after he falls over and hits his head and and needs more delicious jealous Phoenix ~
person JT.
schedule August 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 20 - huh... Phoenix has a family!? I think that is the biggest twist of your story. Ever. I totally agree with Jacob. He is the son of Satan. He can't possibly have family! Also Pilot. I bet he'll try to sleep with Jacob to fuck with Phoenix or something. Anyway, Phoenix finding out about the necklace and getting pissed off was hilarious ~
person oo
schedule August 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
this story just keeps getting crazier and crazier!
update quickly!
person Anon
schedule August 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh, wow, this chapter was very exciting! I already love the family. And I can't wait to find out how things are going to go with Phoenix's brother! You left us with such a major cliffhanger!!!
person Rosei
schedule August 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 20 "Steak Knife"

M!

Yeeehaaaaaaaa!!! Thank you!!!

Life at the Scofield residence!!!
Now why would Phoenix think Jacob would not fit in when
he himself can't resist his youthful charms!!!

I always look forward to an update from you but now
I REALLY am hot in an-ti-ci-pa-tion!!!! HA!!!

What... did Pilot and Phoenix fight over the same boys
when they were in highschool?! HA!!

Thanks!
R
person vicxn
schedule August 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ahhhhhhhhhhhhh! How can u end it there, its like torture or something. Im really enjoying this fic. i only found it yesterday and have totally neglected my friends and house work and basically everything to read it. I hope you update soon i need more!!!!!
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schedule August 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh no Munez, I hope you're feeling better. If it's any consolation, your story is fucking PHENOMENAL!!!! (I hope I spelled that right). This last chapter had me laughing out loud, well actually ALL your chapters have me lol ing b/c you're too funny! I LOVE Jacob; he is hysterical! I was falling out of my chair when he said Phoenix is still a prick and are those real, referring to Jupiter's boobs. He is too much! And oh, Barbie Mom and Felicity going at it; hysterical! And yeah, Pilot does seem pretty creepy, but why would he think that his brother was fucking Jacob? Even if it was true...Great chapter, can't wait to read about Jacob's response! I do hope you're better.
person DarkSacrifice
schedule August 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Omg he knows O.O HE KNOWSSS *makes circles while screaming* dang it!
But I like him thoughXD
Anyways you updated faster! hurraaayy!
Russell really is cute with his cute necklace hahaXD, I guess Russell is exactly what Jacob needs for his confidence.
Phoenix being jealous O.O ?? right?:P I like erm...greedy semes....and I hope he will tame Jacob once moreXD
ANyways please update soon!! aarggh>< I hate waitingXD
thank you btw!