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YAYYYY! A new chapter! I would like to pressure you and say, "Write more!" but I'm trying to learn some modicum of patience. I really don't like Pilot; at first, I thought he would be like, the mysterious, cool brother, but now he just seems like a complete asshole. And personally, I thought it was a big step that Phoenix left the room when he was upset with Jacob, instead of his usual ridiculous tirade, even though of course Jacob didn't see it that way. Anyway, thank you for updating, I think you're a great writer! So funny; one line in particular really had me dying!

I'm not sure I've reviewed much before, but I love this story and I was snickering through this last chapter update. Can't wait to see what happens between Jacob and Pheonix next! ;)

Great stuff! Thanks for the update and mounting tension. You really are very witty. ;-) Love your quips.

ohhh,the high and mighty Phoenix has a knot in his panties...awesome:)
I really, really, really wanne know,why he`s acting so strange!Jealous much?
Maybe he`s upset about the relationship with his brother,and everytime they met,Pilot
reminds him,that he knows all his dirty little secrets...
Yeah, Phoenix is the real slut and soon everyone will know...harhar.
But I still believe in a happy end:)
Oh, and Pilot can comfort Felicity,perfect match!
PLEASE update soon!!!
Greetings,Jules

Poor jacob. It seems Pilot wants Felicity. I wonder why Phoenix married her in the first place if he was cheating on her even beore they got married. The chapter was hilarious and very well written. I hope to see more of Pilot though. He seems to make Phoenix unhappy. I like that. And poor sweet Russell. Is there any hope for him? The poor boy deserves a little bit of loving. Jacob will have to keep that hickey covered up though.

Chapter 21 - WHAT!? PHOENIX, WHAT IS WRONG WITH YOU!? I expected some ass pummeling or something similar but what the helllll... NONE OF THAT! When I was reading it and Pilot was making his move on Jacob I was like ahaha OH SHITTTTT there is going to be a fucking shootout next and then he knocked and it tripled that feeling and then.......... NOTHING. I hope he's really jealous and disgusted beyond reason or something because, honestly, Phoenix not acting Phoenixy is not good. Infact, that is fucking scary. Also the random slut thing and Pilot made me love him a lot. Not anywhere near my love for Phoenix but I definitely feel something~ And in another life I'd totally DEMAND a Phoenix/Jacob/Pilot threesome.

RIP delicious alternate reality scenario

ooohhh pilot sounds hot! more of him and jacob pleeaase. love it, can't wait for more!!!!

I think I'm going to like Pilot ...a lot.

Your story is awesome. I've never been more hooked. What a cliffhanger! Can't wait for the next update!

OMG..... this story is sooooo good!! I'm in love :) The tension is killing me! I got here from a rec on aarin (if I remember right) and almost gave up on it when I realized it isn't complete (I usually only go for complete story.. that's my policy :P) but it got very very interesting very very fast. I'm going to bookmark this and check on it often... hope you'll stick with it :)

Kisses