rate_review Reviews

HOLY SHIT!!!!!! They've got some explaining to do? XDDD Oh googly moogly, this is too much! I really hate Phoenix tho. Seriously. Poor Jacob, being hopelessly in love with such a loser when Russel, the sweetest goth EVER, wants to help heal Jacob's heart. DAMNIT!!!! lol I love you for updating, awesome author ^_^ I know how life can get in the way of yaoi... *shakes fists at Life* YAOI FUN SUCKER!!! lol

Alright, I have to admit that I liked the alot. I read all of your posted chapters in less than two hours and now I am dying for more. The humor was completely unexpected, and it was well, for lack of a better term, hilarious! I couldn't stop clenching my gut with my hands because I was laughing so hard it hurt.

What I like the most however, was how you have managed to display all of your characters. Each has their own personality, and they come alive in their roles, almost as if watching a movie. The relationship between Felicity and Jacob is astounding in it's entirety, because, one would think she would be more...upset, or angry over the fact that Jacob practically just showed up in her home. The fact that Jacob likes her even though she is portrayed as a boring, overtly girly woman makes it just that much more...different.

I especially liked how you threw Russel in to the mix. I am looking forward to seeing how he and Jacob manage to work out with Pheonix looming on the side lines.

update soon alright? Don't leave me in the dark over here!

NEW CHAPTER!!
It was great (as always) and TWO sex scenes??
*swoons* I think I love you :)
I am in love with Jacob and his delema, and I cannot wait to see who he ends up with.
Also, I was wondering: how many chapters do you think this story will end up having?
~Kiki

Oh SHIT! I'm so shocked by the last line, the rest of the chapter just went blank... -grin- LOVED it!

First of all..a update of Dandruff is NEVER a dissapointmentXD
Fuck I enjoyed every sentence I read..xD and btw I enjoy reviewing and commenting and stuffXD sorry for the spam though..XD
I ....love Jacob..seriously, he really has changed ,,,he isn't the full-time-horny bastard anymore...he has serious feelings for Phoenix and if that's a good thing or a bad thing I dont know...and I hope it will be a good thing..meaning I hope he will end up with PhoenixXD as much as I love Russell...Phoenix owns Russell soo.. sorry T_TXD
I love the parts where Jacob gets really depressed (I'm a angst whore XD) and OMigod the Great Phoenix has lost his cool again!!!
woooho I'm so happy that only Jacob knows how to drive Phoenix crazy in different ways than one *sighs* and I love the PART where Phoenix gets
crazy..*cleans up the blood on the floor (nosebleed)*
Holy shit 2 weeksXD it's a miracle Jacob has survived...though Phoenix is really a bastardXD acting really nice around Felicity and pretending like Jacob is nothing but airXD
But we love Phoenix that way, don't weeee :D and btw...what will Phoenix do now that he has gotten his orgasm?XD I mean....will he shove away Jacob or..? ooh he can't!XD because Juanita!! grrr damn you Juanita..!!!..though I think she WILL keep it a secret from Felicity..I hope so for her *grabs her knife* anyyyyyyyywaaaaaaaayyss
I'm so happy you updated today! and I can't wait for the next update and the next update for Blood Rave, which I'm assuming you will update next?XD

Thank you very much and I hope you will get better soon! and *slaps you* lack of talent???? what are you talking about =.=! you own! <3
please update soooon :3

ps: ey Jacob rid the pierced cockxD wahahah *noticed*

Chapter 22 - rofl. Jacob is such a jailbait pussy magnet!!! Also, god. Crazy, jealous, mad Jacob is like the perfect partner for Phoenix... no wonder he fucked him right there. I think those are the qualities Phoenix looks for in a person.

Must be batshit insane and bring the batshit insanity out of me. Must be willing to fuck (as rough and kinky as possible) after days of me treating you like shit. Also, must carry a bat around at all times.

Love,
Phoenix

Also, the sex scene with Russel was hot. But the blowjob scene was hotter. I was like UNFFFF when I read CHERRY.RED.LIPS.

Don't know why that did it for me. But it did.
Do it, I mean.

Anyway, I hate when you update. Because halfway through reading the chapter I'm like "......NOW I HAVE TO WAIT FOR ANOTHER UPDATE!?" ;_;
It's just that good.

I love you and I never normally feel like that. You bring out the worst in me. Much like a Phoenix/Jacob relationship.

Aww. I love Russel. I wish Jacob loved him rather than that jerk-face Pheonix. Please update again soon!

I really enjoy your character dynamics!
And, I must say, Phoenix's family have quite a few characters in it.

The characters are some how able to remain true to themselves,
despite what they might be going through and whatever new
emotions they might be feeling. It gives the story a lot
of depth, and truly brings it to life.

I'm looking forward to the next installment. Keep up the good job.

DammitXD I think this is the third time I commented for 1 chapterXD
I'm sorry for disturbing youxD
can you pleaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaase update soooooooooooooonXD
The wait is killing meee T_______________T Ohhh pleasseeee

ARGH!!!! this story is too good!
When is the next chapter coming out?!?!?!!?!?!?!
Haha i'm *dying* here - please update soon!

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