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for Dandruff

by Munez

person Nemo
schedule May 25, 2012 at 12:00 AM
is this story dead or on hiatus???
person Kay54
schedule January 28, 2012 at 12:00 AM
You do not know how much I love this story! I read the entire thing in 2 and half days. Would of read it in one day if not for school and work. When I first read the summary, I thought it was going to be good, but not this good! I love how you add depth to the characters and don't make them the same cliche I see in most stories (ex: Felicity not being a homophobe stuck b*tch or Phoenix and Jacob falling in love with each other by chapter 5).

I hope one day this year, you will get the desire to post anther chapter because I really need to see what happens next. If not, at least let me know how Dandruff is going to end.
schedule December 31, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I hope you didn't abandome this story. >.< It would be a shame to end in such a moment. XD
I liked reading every single chapter and I'll be on the look out for more. ;)
schedule December 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I still love this story
person kiraru
schedule November 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Why are you doing this to me? * Deep sigh*

P.S. Great story!
person Zannen
schedule October 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
It's entirely infuriating how I got this far into a story that I absolutely ADORE and it ISN'T FINISHED! GAH!
person animekid
schedule October 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Please tell me this story isn't dead; I fucking loved this story. Too bad I can't email you praise.
schedule July 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I did not see that one coming. Even though Felicity is pregnant, I don't feel like Phoenix is the type of person that would even care about that. I can't wait for the next update!
schedule July 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
FOR THE LOVE OF GOD, COME BACK!!!!
person xMalaiax
schedule July 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I put off reading this story ages ago when I saw it updated. Tbh I thought, at the time, it was just going to be another AFF PWP story and I get so sick of those. So when I started reading last night, I found myself facing another dilemma around chapter 4 and that was that this was still a WIP and the updates were rather slow. Truth is I fell in love with this story and Jacob in the first freakin' chapter.

The characters are so amazingly 3D (4D or 5D, actually) and each one has such depth. From Jacob, who manages to trample on everyone he comes in contact with - much like Phoenix, to Felicity who isn't the stereotypical straight girl character in so many m/m novels.

Jacob, with all of his manipulative, sociopathic tendencies is someone I feel deeply for, mostly because he's so fucking imperfect that he's /real/. He fucks everyone over, but manages to fuck himself more in the process - and he can't seem to stop himself even when he knows he's doing it. It's beautifully tragic.

Phoenix is as pathetic as he is cruel, but there's some sick part of all of us hoping he'll change and be the right person for Jacob. He fucks himself up as much as Jacob. They're so masochistic, each in their own way.

Pilot and Russell, Trent and Danica, Tori and all the other extras have completely captured my heart as much as the two main characters (three if you count Felicity, which I do).

I really hope you get your muse again soon, because this story is absolutely brilliant. Thanks for sharing it. (ps: feel free to email me if you update: brattsy@gmail.com)