rate_review Reviews

hihi I'm seriously addicted...I just re-read the chapter...and re-read the Phoenix part for the 4th or 5th time..*lost count*
anyway I wanted to tell you again.....how much I love this fic....and well I noticed that this is actually the first time that Phoenix did Jacob without any.....slaps or...spanks *laugh*
please update soon <3

This is so awesome. I'm seriusly hooked. I can't wait for more.

I really admire upir character development. I feel like their developing at a very realistic pace.

I smell shit on the fan. XD. Awesome story!!!! Despite having a midterm tomorrow I decided to plow *wink* through this story - it was so good! I could't stop clicking 'next chapter.'

awesome characters. and the relationship dynamics creates a lot of sexual tension that you convey really well. especially when it ends in sex!! yet, even having sex isn't enough for these two. They always seem to want more. LOL. Rightly so. Spread your sperm around the world, little gay men!! Whilst the libido still lives within you!!

Can't wait to see how Juanita is going to react!!! I love her.

Ohh wooow.

OMG!

Omg....8()
Jacob is back...jeahhh
That was really...hm...refreshing...giggle.
Not that I mind the cute Russcob action,but Phoenix and Jacob are ment to be together!!!
And now their little bubble of secrets has burst,can`t wait to read Juanita`s reaction.
And I would really really give a lot to be able to see Phoenix face...hihi.
Greetings,Jules

I missed this story. And this part was superbly written. Every line was excellent and I love where the story is going. I guess I could understand why Jacob was smitten over Phoenix. The guy seemed to possess the charm of the devil. But I pity Russel. I hope Jacob would find a way to divert his emotions and yearning to that boy whose feelings for him seemed genuine. I love the interaction between Russel and Jacob. Hope their relationship would last. It kinda contradicts his relationship with Phoenix though, which seemed to be all physical, or is it?

That ending was perfect. Leaves me hanging at the edge of the cliff with only a finger to keep me from falling. So I do hope you get to update soon before I start to feel the pull of gravity. This was beyond perfect. I love this!

Chapter 22 "Good Posture"

HA!!! Poor Juanita!!!!! HA!!!
Will Phoenix have to buy her a new vehicle now?!!!

Despite the terminally poor tempered Phoenix I still love the...
hmmm... is romance(?) the correct word here?!!!!

Thanks!
R

I tore through this chapter like a crazy person!
I HAD to know what was going to happen. I'm sure I missed a million amazing details that I'll love later when I re-read this... but for now... omg... I had to put my lap top down after reading this to smother my face with a pillow to try and not scream and wake up my boyfriend.
Gah. Things are getting so interesting now I can't take it!

Don't mind my fanatic ilu reviews. Hahah. I just... there are too many things I really like about the way you write for me to explain it without a marathon comment. And who wants to read that? ;D

This chapter was fabulous! I can't even imagine how Juanita will react to all this. You are the best!