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November 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love this!!! I hope you continue soon!
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November 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ahhhhhhhhh now I gotta read this bastard again because I am like behind 3 to 4 chapters~!
at least I have a damn computer now just need the internet so no excuses from me anymore soon!
but for some reason I didn't get the update >< I dunno if it's because of all the shit in my inbox or what! I am glad I searched for this and remember from all the crap that's been happening
still I love this fic, you're a good writer, and ignore the shit in your life that's bad as best as you can ( I wish I can follow my own damn advice)
at least I have a damn computer now just need the internet so no excuses from me anymore soon!
but for some reason I didn't get the update >< I dunno if it's because of all the shit in my inbox or what! I am glad I searched for this and remember from all the crap that's been happening
still I love this fic, you're a good writer, and ignore the shit in your life that's bad as best as you can ( I wish I can follow my own damn advice)
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October 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
dude update im gonna cry if you cancel this story :(
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October 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Well hello there, I've got a question: how many chapters will this story have? (I hope it will continue forever xD)
Oh yeah, you got 23% I noticed, I'm so happy <3, hope you will continue on this rate for the rest of the chapter!
Well good luck and erm....I still think the last part was really hot ;D though it would've been better if the smex was described
in details *laugh*
Well thank you for the update and I really, really, really hope you will update soon!
ps: Blood Rave owns
Oh yeah, you got 23% I noticed, I'm so happy <3, hope you will continue on this rate for the rest of the chapter!
Well good luck and erm....I still think the last part was really hot ;D though it would've been better if the smex was described
in details *laugh*
Well thank you for the update and I really, really, really hope you will update soon!
ps: Blood Rave owns
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October 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Updaaaaaaaaaate.... *crawls along ground zombie-style in desperate plea*
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October 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I first would just like to tell you that I absolutely adore this story and have since you first put it up! I can't wait to see what Juanita does!!! Please update!! I'm suffering withdrawl here!
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October 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This might sound crass, but this fic is fucking BRILLIANT! I mean, I haven't laughed that hard in ages, my family thinks I'm probably going crazy for staring at the computer screen then busting out laughing out of nowhere.
The new pool boy scene was the best, I couldn't stop laughing for nothing. I love Jacob's personality and the way in which his mind work is fucking hilarious. It's official, this is my favorite original fic since I found this site. The way you made this fic is really mind catching and funny, There isn't anything I don't like about this story, even Phoenix's S&M ways is addicting.
I wish I knew you in person, I mean if this story is anything to go by, you're probably the best friend I've never met!LOl.
Seriously though, this is the best read I've had in a while, you sure have a way with words.^_^
Thanks,
Kristal
P.S. If you don't update soon I'm affraid you'll have to live with the guilt that you killed me with that cliff-hanger.....
The new pool boy scene was the best, I couldn't stop laughing for nothing. I love Jacob's personality and the way in which his mind work is fucking hilarious. It's official, this is my favorite original fic since I found this site. The way you made this fic is really mind catching and funny, There isn't anything I don't like about this story, even Phoenix's S&M ways is addicting.
I wish I knew you in person, I mean if this story is anything to go by, you're probably the best friend I've never met!LOl.
Seriously though, this is the best read I've had in a while, you sure have a way with words.^_^
Thanks,
Kristal
P.S. If you don't update soon I'm affraid you'll have to live with the guilt that you killed me with that cliff-hanger.....
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October 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Fucking Christ.
I absentmindedly follow this story by checking on it whenever I'm not feeling too vain to check other original m/m stories (other than my own, of course, therefore making that sentence incredibly vain), because it just... intrigues me. I love Jacob. He reminds me so much of myself, what with his delusional inner dialogue.
It took me a while of actually re-reading the story almost completely to figure out where it was I had left off, when things no longer read familiar. That was like chapter 16 or so. I didn't realize I kept up so well on this story. I also have no idea if I've ever reviewed. And that's not because I feel I'm too good to review other original m/m stories, it's because I'm just fucking lazy.
Anyway, back to my original point:
Fucking. Christ.
Gah. What a fucking cliffhanger. You have officially killed me. It's bad enough that I've spent the entire day wired up and ready to fuck like a rabbit in heat, and then I read your story which basically has sex in nearly every chapter, and now my girlfriend cancelled our plans for tonight which means I'm not gonna get fucked at all, and then I get to this last chapter and poor Juanita makes even MY erection dampen slightly.
... lol, dampen.
Ahem! Anyway. Dear Lord I wish to bestow upon you my radical neurotic almost-crack-like-with-how-fast-they-are update speediness fingers. That sentence made no sense. But you'll pretend it did.
Now I'm gonna go masturbate out of pure frustration.
I NEED ANGRY SEX.
I just wrote 'suck' instead of 'sex'.
Oh yeah.
Post the next chapter soon plz.
♥ Camui
I absentmindedly follow this story by checking on it whenever I'm not feeling too vain to check other original m/m stories (other than my own, of course, therefore making that sentence incredibly vain), because it just... intrigues me. I love Jacob. He reminds me so much of myself, what with his delusional inner dialogue.
It took me a while of actually re-reading the story almost completely to figure out where it was I had left off, when things no longer read familiar. That was like chapter 16 or so. I didn't realize I kept up so well on this story. I also have no idea if I've ever reviewed. And that's not because I feel I'm too good to review other original m/m stories, it's because I'm just fucking lazy.
Anyway, back to my original point:
Fucking. Christ.
Gah. What a fucking cliffhanger. You have officially killed me. It's bad enough that I've spent the entire day wired up and ready to fuck like a rabbit in heat, and then I read your story which basically has sex in nearly every chapter, and now my girlfriend cancelled our plans for tonight which means I'm not gonna get fucked at all, and then I get to this last chapter and poor Juanita makes even MY erection dampen slightly.
... lol, dampen.
Ahem! Anyway. Dear Lord I wish to bestow upon you my radical neurotic almost-crack-like-with-how-fast-they-are update speediness fingers. That sentence made no sense. But you'll pretend it did.
Now I'm gonna go masturbate out of pure frustration.
I NEED ANGRY SEX.
I just wrote 'suck' instead of 'sex'.
Oh yeah.
Post the next chapter soon plz.
♥ Camui
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October 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Your writing is so fluent and has such a good rhythm to it. I read the entire thing in one go in the middle of the night and it took me over 3 hours. It is, so far, my favourite on AFF and I'm praying that you update regularly. I'm a little desperate for the emotional side to come out from Phoenix and I have this image of Jacob deciding he's had enough and trying to leave completely and Phoenix eventually coming after him.. right, day dream over :P
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October 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hope you're all better now Munez. Based on the chapter, I would have never known you were sick. It was fabulous! And well worth the What a fantastic chapter! I'm glad that Jacob was able to get closer to Russell (lol), and it's too bad he can't just forget Phoenix and go for Russell. Why is he so obsessed w/Phoenix; all Phoenix does is hurt him and torment him.
What he did to the car was hysterical! I mean, come on, how stupid is Phoenix: the kid walked outside with a fucking baseball bat for goodness sakes!!!!! That was GREAT!
And poor Juanita; OMG, what's she gonna do; she must have been shocked to shit to see that!
I can't wait for the next chapter, but of course I have no choice. And I certainly can't rush perfection. XD
What he did to the car was hysterical! I mean, come on, how stupid is Phoenix: the kid walked outside with a fucking baseball bat for goodness sakes!!!!! That was GREAT!
And poor Juanita; OMG, what's she gonna do; she must have been shocked to shit to see that!
I can't wait for the next chapter, but of course I have no choice. And I certainly can't rush perfection. XD