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by Munez

person tdorian
schedule December 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I've laughed so hard at Juanita blackmail towards Phoenix ! This story is so hilarious,it makes my day on every update.Pilot is back !! yayyyy !!!
person MC Cloverville
schedule December 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
oh, i love this chapter! i LOLed at the part juanita asked phoenix to have sex with her. and gosh, jacob's so cute trying to point out that columbia is in mexico. and uh-oh, russel had caught jacob partying. and pilot's back! i hope this sparks some jealousy from phoenix.

person JT.
schedule November 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ahahaha. First of all, Phoenix saying "Don't be like that. We're friends aren't we?" is probably one of the creepiest and, strangely, most hilarious things I have ever imagined to happen to me. I mean... read.
Yes, read. Just read. I do not have crazy, nonsensical fantasies of a fictional character. No, sir. Of course not.

Also, ahahahahaha. Fuck. I WANT YOU TO HAVE SEX WITH ME.
Oh god. I blame you for making me laugh loudly and crazily at 5:30am. I'm pretty sure my neighbours down the fucking street can hear me.

But, honestly, can you blame her? I'd do the same thing.

No, wait, I'd ask for a threesome with Phoenix and Jacob and some money.
Also some Phoenix/Jacob home movies for my trip back to Colombia, Mexico.

I've noticed that sex encounters with Phoenix are always hilarious yet horribly sexy.
I'm not sure how he does it. Or, I guess, how you do it... or something.

Why does Jacob attract the jealous guys? Actually, who knew Russel was the jealous type anyway.
And, oh god, if Russel is jealous over Jacob being felt up by some guy at a party I can only imagine what Phoenix would do..... Especially, if he ends up finding out about the party from Pilot. Not that Pilot knows about the party yet. Just that Jacob was with another guy at a McDonald's. Yes. I predict batshit insanity.

Speaking of Pilot, I love that guy. Seriously, I love him.

Look. I've found someone else to love. Take that!!!

Anyway, I agree. You should permanently tape a bat to Jacob's hand. For Phoenix's libido and for mine.
person gillie
schedule November 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Your ability with words astounds me! Shoved a rabid weasel down his pants!!!!!!!!!! Just fabulous! Great, fantastic, and most excellent!
person gillie
schedule November 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Again super! Well worth the wait!
person JayK
schedule November 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hey I just wanted to say that I love your story!
person JulesGer
schedule November 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
huhu,

I`m sure as hell didn`t forget you...
whuppie,that was really an awesome long satisfying chapter!
I can`t believe,that Juanita was shipped off to columbia...what the fcuk?
But I want to thank you,that you didn`t describe the sex between them....thank you very much!
If she`s clever,she could write a letter to felicity.Phoenix was especially cruel this chapter, to tease Jacob in such a bad
way...tz.
Jacob should kick his behind for good!
I really like Trent,also he is a bad influence for little Jacob and I`m feeling sorry for Russell...hm.
Pilot is back...yeah!
Please continue soon,Jules
person kylee
schedule November 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh no! Juanita. Was it even possile for Phoenix to get it up for Juanita? This was one crazy chapter.Very well written. I feel sorry for Russell. Jacob seems to be in self destructive mode. I feel like Phoenix is breakin Jacob's heart and Jacob is breakin Russell's heart. I am eager to see how things are going to go with Pilot.
person MrsOkita
schedule November 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I really enjoy this story.
I love sarcasm and the interaction between Jacob and Phoenix is hilarious.
It's very well written as well, it's amazing to be able enjoy fanfiction but not feel like your reading
something other than good literature, I hate struggling to understand what the author is saying.
I'm on the edge of my seat wondering what Juanita is going to do! I simply love her but I wonder
if she's going to tell Felicity! And then what felicity is going to do!
Also, I have a question, the warnings say S&M, is there going to be any hardcore S&M between
Jacob and Phoenix in the future? I hope so!
Thanks for the good read and i can't wait till you update the next chapter.
person FunkyMonkey
schedule November 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh, sweeeeet, an update! :D This is the only story I follow on this site because, goddamn, I love the characterization, the way the plot moves, the dialogue, the sex, everything. Your characters are so unique, and their interactions are a lot of fun to read. I have a soft spot for Russell, and part of me wants Jacob to be in a nice, healthy relationship with him––but that wouldn't be any fun, now, would it? :) The story is fantastic. Keep it up!