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OMG! This was a great chapter. My family must think I am insane because I was giggling for the entire time I was reading this. There are going to be some tears at the end of this story. I personally believe that this story is about Phoenix and Jacob. Phoenix certainly deserves to be cheated on and tortured but I think that Jacob's heart belongs to him. If he goes with Russell, he will just be using the poor boy and he will always have Phoenix at the back of his mind. This is the same with Phoenix. You did a good job of stating it in this chapter. He has the perfect life and he would have to give up a lot to be with Jacob but he is not satisfied with Felicity. She really is just his token wife. Poor Felicity is going to be heartbroken but I also believe that it is only a matter of time before she catches Phoenix in one of his escapades. He seems to like living dangerously. I think that Felicity is so sweet, she definitely deserves better than to be a trophy wife to a husband who is always cheating on her. I think you have done a great job with this story. Every single chapter is fresh and super sharp. I am very eager to see how it all turns out.

Russell!!!! RUSSELLLLLLLL!!!! That's all I have to say on your question XD And, LOVED the update!!! I've missed this story to pieces, and I'm just as surprised as Jacob at Phoenix's reaction O_o I don't trust him... Not. One. BIT!!! >< I'm so worried that something horrible is gonna happen to ruin the happiness that's building in Jacob... I mean, yes, the little brat does make stupid decisions, but I think he's finally (FINALLY!!!) on the right track! *steals Russel and Jacob away to live Happily Ever After* XD Can't wait 'till the next installment!

As I said: I really liked this chapter, so what does a obsessed person do? Of course! Read it againXD
I simply love the part where Jacob hugs him! Damn, I love Phoenix and his ass-side, especially his ass-side! But I know there's something beneath the shell!
And ps: If you're going to couple Jacob with someone else I'm gonna suicide!!!XD SO YOU DON"T HAVE A CHOICE LEFT NOW?! DO YOU?XD

Don’t trust me too much. I’m not your knight in shining armour. I’d still fuck you for fun… and to piss Phoenix off.”

“I have a boyfriend person.”

Hahahhah, I just love that part!XD
Though I want Jacob to end up with Phoenix, I want him to make Phoenix jealous with PilotXD
Anyways, Trent is adorableXD he really does care about his friend in his own weird way (I just now noticed Trent, because the other information in this chapter was much more valuable)XD
Oh btw I read your responses and you said that Juanita will make another appearanceXD and damn it! I know something like that would happen.
I think she wants to ruin Phoenix' career more than anyone now...even more than PilotXD
Okay, thank you very much hope you will update this real fast!
ps: how many months before Jacob turns 18?

I just read all of this story, and I have to say that Jacob has to end up with
*drumroll*
RUSSELL

I love this story! I want to see Jacob get with Pilot.

I'm much more emotionally invested in the relationship between Jacob and Pheonix, but I think the story would be more effective if they don't end up together. An emotional goodbye with Pheonix while Jacob leaves with Russel will definitely have me in tears.

Oh my! I was totally not expecting that twist! Jacob dumping Phoenix while crying about it? On one side, the sane, boring side of my mind I'm jumping for joy that finally Jacob is in a healthy, good relationship. But on the other insane, naughty side of my brain I'm thinking, OH NOOOOOOOOO NO MORE KINKY PHOENIXxJACOB SEX NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!! XD Somehow I don't think Phoenix is just going to leave it at that, or Jacob. I kind of am hoping that Jacob's just going to drive Phoenix insanely jealous until he can't help himself!! Karmic payback against Phoenix. Also I adore Pilot. If I could I would take Phoenix's kinky sexiness and combine it with Pilot's sarcastic, more down to earth, less dickishness. That would be the awesomest guy alive!! *sigh* I love you for giving me such a wonderful story with such hysterical characters, I'm sure the people next to me do not appreciate me laughing until 4 in the morning when your updates come, but who cares? It can't be helped. And as always, can't wait for the next chapter!

Damn, what kind of question is that?!
Of course I want him with Phoenix, but I want him to torture Phoenix somehow...
Oh like invite Pilot over and flirt the hell with him! or.. or invite Russell?
Naah I like Pilot more so I want him to invite Pilot overXD and also tell Felicity and Phoenix about his plans after his 18th birthday.
When is it btw? what is the date now in your story? O_O
It was so cute of Phoenix to hug him like that! that is my favorite part of all!
I think for Phoenix it is kinda weird that someone actually dumped HIM, before he wanted to dump Jacob.
Though It looks like Phoenix doesn't think it matters that they broke up their affair, I think he really is upset about it! I mean the chapter where ..hmmm what chapter was it? w/e it was the chapter where Jacob had seen the cockpiercing and said it to Felicity and Felicity later left for a shift for a sick colleague. There we could read a part of his thinking and there he actually said that Jacob was affecting him too.
And yes! I'm glad he finally confessed to Phoenix, I don't know it's kinda relieving.
Btw: I think Phoenix likes him too, I don't know, his attitude is just too confusingXD
My heart made a happy leap when I saw that Chapter 24 was 100%, I was like NO WAY!!XD
You really updated fast this time! thank you so much for the update =D and I hope your next update will be as fast as this one.
Haha doh it's no wonder I remembered the scene with Brett, Like I said earlier: I'm obsessedXD
So in total I've read this fic about 6 times or soXD
THANK YOU OHO HOHOHOHOHOOHO SOOOO MUCH <3 Please update soon! and even if you don't like the angst you're writingXD
I love it!!!XD

Ps: Blood Rave is next right? Though I wouldn't mind another chapter of this!
I'm so glad you updated this earlier!
Why did you update this earlier than Blood Rave? did you get more inspiration for this chapter???=D

Oh effing hell, I'm Felicity! AAARRGH! Because I SOOOO only want to see Phoenix's good sides (not sure what they are yet, but I'm sure they are there!)and I soooo want it to work out in some totally impossible way that will never happen... Oh! Oh! Oh! Have Felicity and the goth-boy realize they love each other and elope! Yes! And make Pilot move in to comfort poor Phoenix and Jacob! YES! PERFECT ENDING RIGHT THERE! And look! A pig just flew by, juggling four dodo-birds! Amazing the stuff that can happen, right?! Right?! What are you glaring about, you just have to write it down now!

-slowly comes back to what qualifies as reality in my world-
Ah. No. Won't happen, will it? Well, I just MIGHT have to cut-n-paste my ending over yours when I have read it, to quench my thirst for impossible fluff... -sigh-

AMAZING chapter, as always, can’t believe Jacob TOLD him! I was gaping my jaw off (not sure how that’s done…). Can’t as usual, wait for the next one, but, as usual, I will… am desperately and hopelessly in love with you and your characters… see! I’m Felicity! I told you! Well, I got to be a hot chick with a great job, anyways…
/Wynja