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great chapter....now I'm waiting for the next one....*tears*

Update, update, update!!
This is like my faviourite storyy!

Whew. I just read that all in one go. It took a hell of a long time, but it was pretty fucking awesome.

Thing is, some part of me really want's Jacob to end up with Phoenix.
But I was Jacob to be happy.

And from the looks of things, those two scenarios can't coincide. Sigh.

I'm not really diggin' Russell, actually.
Like seriously not. But...I wouldn't be too torn apart, I suppose, it Jacob ended up with him.
Just not very satisfied, especially if there isn't anymore delving into Phoenix's feelings towards Jacob before the climax.

Pilot would be interesting as someone for Jacob to end up with, but from the looks of things I'm guessing that's pretty improbable.


Anyway, you should definitely continue! I'll be depressed if this is never updated again or something.

*grips hair* Finally had some time off from work/life/etc. to read this and my other favorite story 'child of the night' and I come to the author thingie, which I do read to EVERY story, and I'm like "I DON'T FUCKING KNOW WHO TO PICK! ARG!"


#$%$%$#%$545454!!!!!!!! >< I like...both of them *sobs* The whole thing with Russell is so cute but god mr. ass P man is hot too and.....*Grips hair again*

I personally found the thing with Juanita to be the epic part of this story...and I am wondering about the 'big payback REVENGE' that might come later on *it's 2:30 and I am hyper as hell so making corny jokes*

Hell I'll be happy with whoever but I am wondering how the hell is J/P going to be fixed again after Jacob did the whole, 'confession' thing Oo

*Goes off to be more hyper and insomiac* (HELL WITH MY SP!)

Wow... I did not see that happening. That went from not so serious to super serious! Although I guess it was kinda serious the chapter before... Anyway, I was trying to figure out where you were going to take this fic. I'm sad to see Jacob and Phoenix break b/c I really was into that couple but it's nice that Russel doesn't have to be hurt.

Anyway, I hope you continue soon. This is awesome!

Wow, I couldn't stop reading this, damn. What the fuck is your problem, Author? I have never read about a PAIR of main characters as fucked up and as well rounded as this and are you sure you really need to ask? It's definitely Phoenix I'd choose. Don't you dare choose Russell! (please.) Because seriously, even though Russell would be good for Jacob, it's a chicken's way out! And by the chicken, I mean you!! It'd be so much more fulfilling to see you try to work yourself out of this entanglement that is Tori x Russell x Jacob x Phoenix x Felicity x Pilot. This is so complex that I applaud you. I also want to see Mr Arrogant's life crashing around his ears for messing around a tad too much and his mom's reaction to it, ha. Jacob's too, of course. With the way the story is currently built, disappointment would be abundant if this doesn't properly leads to Phoenix. Dysfunctional works way better than happily ever after anyway. So be a good writer and properly untangle yourself from this, all right?

I'll be bookmarking you.

huhu,

Omg...what the fukc... I´ve totally missed an update...tz.
I´dont know,but I´m not so happy about the fact,that Jacob "dumped" Phoenix...hm weird...
Hmpf,the whole ending-szene was so mature and Phoenix was sort of nice and understanding...I hate it!:)
I still want to kick Phoenix in the nuts.He is going to feel bad soon...for sure!
Pilot is so sexy,maybe only a little sexszene, pleaseeeeeeeeee:)
I love Trent!And he should be gay!!!
Russell is so sweet and serious and he really loves Jacob...hm. but I fear for him and his feelings.
But in the end,Jacob deserves someone,who really loves him!!!I trust you to find the right ending!:)
More please!!!
Greetings,Jules

As weird as it may sound (or not)... I want Jacob and Phoenix together. I want each of them to work out their individual issues. And somehow transform the current abuse relationship into something healthier. ^_^

When I started reading this story I was convinced that I would hate it. I swear, from beginning to end, there was NOTHING that I did not like about this story. It was awesome. You even managed to give it a happy ending (I hope that is the ending because it really deserves a happy ending). I wish that there was some sort of recourse for Felicity. I really felt sorry for her and kept wishing that she would divorce the bastard and leave him penniless. Your character development was superb. I felt like I was reading a psych case study. You have a lot of teens in psych hospitals with similiar stories and personalities to your main character. If you ever go into nursing, work in a psych hospital on the adolescent side just once. You will have all of the the writing material for your next big story...which I look forward to reading!

Awesome Job.

Hmmm, another well written and smut-tastic chapter- even though there wasn't any smut!-lol. Did I mention how much I love your writing style? I love that its different from all the other original stories, there is no bullshit it is what it is, you know. I'm so freaking addicted that I've saved this stories in my favorites under "Good Smut Check Often",lol no lie!My friends all thing I'm a pervert now because not only do I watch smut I read it too, its official I'm changing my name to Phoenix (I wonder if thats ok for a girl?mmm....) Anyway let me stop rambling about how much of a smut-hoe I am, the fact of the matter is you stories is the shit and I love it!! Even though its not a election I'm voting for Jacob and Phoenix, I mean its obvious that they like each other and if you look closer (squint your eyes)you could even see that they love each other ( never mind the fact that Jacob just told Phoenix he loved him). But if in the end they dont make it together this was a banging ass stories anyway!