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update pleaaaase!!!
I just re-read it for the fifth times now, I can't get it out of my miiind, this is such a good story, I like everything about it, you're not abandoning it aren't you?

I was just rereading this story. I really wish you would update. I want to know what happens next. I love the story. Please update soon

Hi Im new to the site,and I just stumbled upon this story yesterday. after spending the whole day today Ive finished all 26 chapters. Im new to fanfiction or non published original works, but I can tell that this is really well written. I never thought reading this could be. . arousing? (haha)It's just sad that it's unfinished and we're let hanging right when the plot starts to thicken :( I just hope that everything is well with the author and maybe one day thy can finish the story. :)

P.S. I cant get over the "juanita" incident. hilarious but somehow makes me think even less of phoenix. still love him though

Was clicking through some saved favorite stories and so sad this was never finished! :(

Daaaaaamn! This story sucked me in like Hawaiis undertoe and I could NOT stop reading. What the hell is up with Phoenix that guy is harder to read than kanji. Despite all his bad habits I really love Jacob. Cant wait to read what comes next.

UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! *marches around with picket signs*
PLEEEEEEEEEEEASE!

update pleeeeeeeease!!!

Hey Munez! I've been thinking about this story for quite awhile now. You haven't updated in let's see, Feb. of 2011 and it's almost Oct. of 2012, that would make it 20 months!!!! Holy shit, that's practically two years!!! Ha, and I went to college for that! lol

So I'm wondering what's going on? Will you ever continue or is this story totally dead?

I certainly hope not b/c there are so many loose ends to be tied up.

I'll just keep my fingers crossed and hope you didn't forget about this most awesome story.

Reading through chapter 13, I (rather unfortunately) flashed back to my own days in a poshy uniformed private school. Nine years of hefty financial aid and being the 'poor kid' (standard middle class and a single mother who worked for a living meant 'poor' to these people) make me sympathize pretty emphatically with your characters... Oh lord, the talk of girls in their ridiculous excuses for clothing, much less uniforms, remind me of lining up, back straight, arms tense at my sides with hands stiff so a teacher could check to make sure each of our skirts was long enough to be past our fingertips (the skirts were supposed to be something like two inches past the tips of the fingers, but the faculty and staff had pretty much agreed that was a lost cause and settled for, 'as long as it's close and we can't see the curve of your ass cheeks'). As soon as inspections were over, some girls would immediately roll the waists of their skirts to bring their hemlines up, weather conditions be damned. Dark times. I wonder if you suffered through a similar experience, and have applied it to your writing? If not, then hats off to you for writing a believable description in spite of that! If so, then I feel for you, really, and I respect the way you've recycled those experiences. 

One kid at my school got a private jet for his birthday, I shit you not.  

Totally enjoying this story!

Jacob is such a kick!

Working out how these two get together
is probably going to be difficult but
I have faith in you! HA!))))

Thanks!
R