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February 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is great! I had wondered what happened to Cadet Murphy during the story; thanks for the update!
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February 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Bos's possessiveness is kind of scary. I feel like he's got a little bit of Yavisk and Miljan combined. He's got a sense of humor and he's always backing off when Murphy starts freezing up and feeling like he's about to get punished, but he's got a pretty strict set of rules too. I feel like it's working, too--Murphy definitely seems freaked out. I look forward to seeing what will happen now that his change has completed.
Also, Tiger and Miljan's cameo was awesome! They really have a great relationship. I wonder what Murphy's surprise will change into once the fact that a carrier who was caught in similar circumstances but maintains such a good relationship with his captor sinks in. Also, I wonder how the dominant figures in the household, like Bos and--Dragu? Ah I forgot his name, I know he's Ami's husband--react to and view Tiger's relationship with Miljan. Do they disapprove? Or do they aspire towards a similarly close and uninhibited relationship?
Love your writing! Thanks for this chapter.
Also, Tiger and Miljan's cameo was awesome! They really have a great relationship. I wonder what Murphy's surprise will change into once the fact that a carrier who was caught in similar circumstances but maintains such a good relationship with his captor sinks in. Also, I wonder how the dominant figures in the household, like Bos and--Dragu? Ah I forgot his name, I know he's Ami's husband--react to and view Tiger's relationship with Miljan. Do they disapprove? Or do they aspire towards a similarly close and uninhibited relationship?
Love your writing! Thanks for this chapter.
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February 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ahhh I really miss the Miljan household lol such a strange, burly group of men with carriers.
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February 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Please keep updating this story; its great! I love the part with Miljan and Tiger, it was too cute. I hope Calvin and Bos can work things out and they get a happy ending.
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February 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Squee! You updated. I love this side-story. I'm glad Tiger and Miljan are still hanging around. The 'Russians' seem to make-up my favorite pairings.
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February 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
THANK YOU!!!!!! X3 I wasn't expecting a new chapter so soon! It really surprised me when I saw it XD I really don't what to say...just...it was awesome -.- I just love this story. I can't get enough of it. Can't wait for the next chapter :) And again....THANK YOU! ><
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February 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Geh, you can't stop there!
I want to see more of how smart Cal can be, how he exercises his intelligence, and what Bos expects from him. When he mentions the "old ways of life," does that mean being able to sit down with Cal at the dinner table one day and being able to just talk to each other?
Hope you continue this. Thanks for the chapter!
I want to see more of how smart Cal can be, how he exercises his intelligence, and what Bos expects from him. When he mentions the "old ways of life," does that mean being able to sit down with Cal at the dinner table one day and being able to just talk to each other?
Hope you continue this. Thanks for the chapter!
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February 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
pls pls more. I like it. :-)
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February 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You are a very good writer and I really like all your stories. ^^ I hope you'll continue this one even though you've marked it as complete. *puppy eyes* How smart Cal is? And what's Bos like? Will Cal try to escape? *begs you to continue* I have so many questions that were left unanswered...
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February 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
:o I thought this was going to be a one-shot only >< I read the first part a long time ago, just didn't review..... :( ...I do that a lot. Sorry!
Well, the first part was awesome. I really didn't remember who Cal was (had to look), but the fanfic really made me fond of him, and interested in his story. It was really good, and I also wanted to know more. But asking for more on a one-shot, its something I don't do (I think -_-'...lol maybe wish for it XD). Well anyway, the first was good, and second was even more. If there is more, I won't complain XD If it ends here, well....it ends :( But THANK YOU so much for writing more!!! :) It is really interesting.
Well, the first part was awesome. I really didn't remember who Cal was (had to look), but the fanfic really made me fond of him, and interested in his story. It was really good, and I also wanted to know more. But asking for more on a one-shot, its something I don't do (I think -_-'...lol maybe wish for it XD). Well anyway, the first was good, and second was even more. If there is more, I won't complain XD If it ends here, well....it ends :( But THANK YOU so much for writing more!!! :) It is really interesting.