schedule
March 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
It was a rather funny chapter ! I love the grand da.I felt sorry for Cal.not everyone is happy about their fate as Tiger is.Great chapter.
schedule
March 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
please write more...this story is so great
schedule
March 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
thank you so much for the new chapter, poor cal, but it seems bos really cares for him.
schedule
March 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
cricri - I can't write about Havar. Havar breaks my heart.
schedule
March 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
that little intro about peer pressure was hilarious, but I wouldn't give up these last few chapters for anything ;) and I can't stop asking for more!
Anyway that part with Red Murphy and Cal was just heartbreaking. It really shows that Red cares for him, and I was reminded of Tiger's dad for a moment; the fact that their parental relationships haven't disintegrated along with the world around them is really startling, considering how much everything else has changed. And Miljan and Bos' interaction during the phone call was really funny too.
I love Cal. That "OK. I know" at the end had so much behind it. He's smart, but he's stuck, and he's faced with the prospect of living with this guy for the rest of his life. I think the subtlety of the inferences are brilliant too. Like when Cal tells his uncle that he'll see him in a couple of weeks, when Bos specifically said that Cal would only get to see him once he was pregnant. Great language.
Thanks for this chapter and looking forward to the next one!
Anyway that part with Red Murphy and Cal was just heartbreaking. It really shows that Red cares for him, and I was reminded of Tiger's dad for a moment; the fact that their parental relationships haven't disintegrated along with the world around them is really startling, considering how much everything else has changed. And Miljan and Bos' interaction during the phone call was really funny too.
I love Cal. That "OK. I know" at the end had so much behind it. He's smart, but he's stuck, and he's faced with the prospect of living with this guy for the rest of his life. I think the subtlety of the inferences are brilliant too. Like when Cal tells his uncle that he'll see him in a couple of weeks, when Bos specifically said that Cal would only get to see him once he was pregnant. Great language.
Thanks for this chapter and looking forward to the next one!
schedule
February 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i love your story, since november, august and now this.......i hope you're gonna continue this story, and it will be wonderfull if you write about havar exclusively....keep up the good work....
schedule
February 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
miljan and tiger are so cute together, it is so awesome that your universe is growing more and more.
schedule
February 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love this new serie and I'm glad you continue this one as well.It's also the frist one where the "relationships" are less arsh...I hope ther will be more soon !
schedule
February 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like your writing style *nod*
schedule
February 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
yeepeee!!!
I love your storie. (and the two others too). I like how you deal with relationships when an inegality of power. I am a woman, but still it would be difficult (at least) for me to live in a world were you heve to ask to eat. What do you do when you have no choice. I guess wallow in self pity and ressentment is not the solution...
Hope you update soon.
Bye
M
I love your storie. (and the two others too). I like how you deal with relationships when an inegality of power. I am a woman, but still it would be difficult (at least) for me to live in a world were you heve to ask to eat. What do you do when you have no choice. I guess wallow in self pity and ressentment is not the solution...
Hope you update soon.
Bye
M