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for Cadet Murphy

by minkabi

person Everdean
schedule April 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Very intense and very good as usual. Cals one of my favourites. Love it!!
person Chloeknz
schedule April 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Cuuuuute. You're doing a great job, keep it up. I'm scared for Calvin and the punishment Bos will give him. I hope he eventually decides to let poor Cal take the contraceptive.
person murrd
schedule April 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hey Kabi,
i have to say, your stories often make me depressed. The way carriers are treated is somewhat like how women were treated in old age. And perhaps in some muslim countries? In fact, sometimes i'm so disgusted about the life of carriers that i almost stop reading, just to come back later because your way of writing is so good. For these people not to have a say in over their own bodies or their lives in general, is sickening. Dont get me the wrong way though, i dont mean to be rude. Your writing is good and and the plot interesting, i have in fact read all chapters you have gotten out so far.
Though i often wonder while reading your stories... in the same situation i would expect more of the carriers to do suicide. But the will to live, its pretty strong isnt it? Even in circumstances like that, people still try to live through them... trying to find some things, even small things, to make life worth living. Weird isnt it?
person tf
schedule April 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yeah... more Cadet Murphy... I wish Cal had just used it instead of trying to hide it first... Bos is so unreasonable... I hope Tiger isn't the only one who's husband actually shows he cares for him- more please!
person kagecat
schedule March 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
what you have so far is so intriguing :D and i love it X3. i love Miljan and Tiger's relationship, and Cal is just cute. I thing Bos is trying, but he also seems to know when to back off.

Grandda makes me smile. I would love to read more on all of them.

:o Havar was the carrier with Yavisk wasn't he? i don't think i could stand to read about all what happened. The clues i got in november when the doctor checked him out was bad enough. I don't think i'd want details. It was took upsetting to read the first time T^T
person noinwhere
schedule March 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
The Grandfather Is a hoot! I loved this chapter. I was wondering if we are going to find out more about Ami and Drag, like how they met and so on. I can't wait to read the next chapter!
person Megg
schedule March 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
omg......what happens next!!!!!!!!!!?????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????? plz plz plz tell me there is more!
person Pierette
schedule March 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
He, he, granddad is great. Did he only come by for a visit or is he actually going to live with them, I wonder... I like Cal a lot and all the Serbic guys too. You draw magnificent characters, can't wait for more!
person tf
schedule March 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Complete? I hope not b/c I really liked meeting the grandfather and I've definitely become attached to Cal and hope we get to see more of him and everyone in the house... please... I'm not above begging ^_^ ... and peer pressure I guess serves the greater good sometimes ;)
person L.S.
schedule March 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
haha i am happy I could recognize some of the words :) I know some russian, and I'd guess whatever language you are pulling from has some common terms! haha but aw, poor Cal!! haha I wish granddad liked him more : (