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Closest thing to love you can find in this storys  universe xD I think i will try drawing fanart for you xD

I know this story was supposed to be about Calvin, but my fave parts are Tiger! I wish we got to read a really good juicy sex scene between him and Mil! Maybe someday? Anyway, great writing as always. I enjoy how much you use dialogue and your voices shine through. :)

Hello, Kabi. Well-written mpreg is in short supply so I've been devouring your stories with gusto! Highlights for me include Kosin and Jesse's storylines and the events in the Serbians' household. The way you convey the disempowerment of the carriers is wringingly sad.

My "manparts only, please!" reading preferences meant that I tended to skim over the actual sex scenes but Bos making Calvin put on his Bos-smelling shirt was delicious.

There seem to be lots of plot possibilities for this AU so I hope you continue to update.

Cheers,

EbW

lol

It seems like out side the CEC men and carriers could actually mingle without that much violence! or maybe it is only Mel's family! :P but wait in Ivan's story it was the same too! :D

Well love this one as much as the rest of your fics ;) and did I mention how much I love Tiger and Miljan??? *.* they are the best couple ever! :D

Nice compromise at the end there. Considering the world, that's probably about the best Calvin could hope for.

I liked it lots and lots xD

that was beautiful! especially the part where Bos gives Cal the shot. When I saw "VI (End)," I thought, Noo! but I think I am satisfied with this ending. Their dynamic has really evolved and the trust they show to each other now is just really great. thanks so much for writing this side story. I liked all the characters.

Your stories always seem to be heavy with psychological struggles with the sociological impact of the carrier minority, there's always a seed of hope you plant in them that just keeps me hooked. And this story was absolutely my favorite. Certainly, there are still a few problems between Cal and Bos but with this (okay, very hot) first-time scene on this sixth chapter, but you've promised growth to this relationship all the while keeping me satisfied that this is the end. I also love your characters (they always seem to stand out). Thanks for writing.

I always enjoy your writings, but I particularly enjoyed Cadet Murphy. Your use of descriptions is powerful without being too much and they are a joy to read.

I'm glad Bos gave Cal the shot at least and they seem to have settled... my eyes lit up when I saw another ch. but can't help being sad that it's the end... though if you get inspired to write a sequel where we get all of the carriers/husbands in the house, I would really love it... so thanks for sharing and I'll keep hoping!