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Isn't there any other site where you could post this story in english? for those like me that are really enjoying your story, pretty please! m(_ _)m
it's just so unfair that everyone has to pay for the pettyness of a few. if they were so unsatisfied with it they should've just dropped it or offered help instead of merelly criticizing. after all you did warn from the beginning that english wasn't your language and you weren't fluent with it. yes there were gramatical mistakes but as a raw draft they could be overlooked and the story was perfectly compreensible, not to mention you already had the 1st chapters betaed and I assume once the story finished you were planning on have it totally betaed, right? why couldn't people just be patient? I'm so frustrated and pissed right now, TRLT is currently one of my favorite stories and I was really looking forward to the next chapters. =(
please please please consider maintaining this story in AFF, or if your really against it just move it to some other site (Aarinfantasy or FictionPress) were those like me who are so enjoying your story can get the pleasure of reading it till end! m(_ _)m *sorry if I sound annoying*
khayman

I hate those who downgrade writers and hound them simply because they can not speak/write english properly. I will miss TRLT greatly I took great enjoyment in reading your story and shall mourn its loss in this site, but I understand your reasoning and I support it greatly. May those ignorant A**holes realize their stupidity and be ashamed. Its people like them that give us English speaking people bad names, idiotic brainless simpletons. Well, goodbye and Adios. Ja Mata Miikoto

Dear Suryalle,

What a shock to read your note that your were removing this story. I always looked forward to reading it and am so sorry that you feel the need to discontinue it here.
It just amazes me that some feels who feels so uncomfortable with your writing, (grammer and spelling aside)would feel the need to go on reading it let alone commenting.
You have an extreme talent for detail and such a creative mind and I will miss your stories. I will hopefully find you listed in the lastest column again soon.

Will miss read your work,
A fan

Loves to Laugh

>0< I am soooo sorry you were put down by those horrible reviewers!!!!! I love your stories!!! And i competely understand how hard it is for some one to try and write outside of your native language. I am half korean half japanese and english is my third language. Overall the most important part of writing is the ability to capture a readers attention and keep it. You have that talent in spades and the more you chalenge yourself to write in the language the better you will become with using it over time. I really hope you are able to ignore the idiots who nitpick poor authors. they usually are the ones who have a really hard time writing anything good so they put down other peoples works to make themselves feel better. For what its worth your stories have always been some of my favorite ones to read. ^-^ Please let me know when you put the story back up completely. I cant wait to continue reading. <3

always your fan,

Tae

I understand your frustration with reviewers that nitpick on language skills. Everyone should take a diversity course to learn how to treat people from different cultures and backgrounds. The internet has allowed people to reach across oceans to communicate with each other and I am glad for the experience it provides. I do not put much weight on folks who believe it is necessary to comment on someones grammer. I am always amazed when I meet people who can read and write in multiple languages. I have a friend from Germany who has an expression that translates in English as follows: "second language, second life". Please do not be swayed by comments from people who have no patience with any minor mistakes that are in your stories. You are a great writer and I will miss you stories if you decide to stop publishing on AFF. If you move your stories to another website like Live Journal please let me know. Thanks!

Ooh! I hope Mahric and Fane will get together and have babies! ^^ I've been thinking that is Maksha one of those Nagas that is able to carry babies? Because I could totally see him pregnant... XDDD

Btw, today I was almost late for work because I just HAD to read the newest chapter... :D I couldn't move away from the laptop before I had finished it and then I had to run! :DD Can't wait to see what happens next in the story. ^^

Thank you for the update!´It already starts to clear up! You said the showdown will be in a few chappies does that mean this story will end soon?? I really hope not! Cause I really love this story and in my opinion it could continue forever!! See you soon!!

Sorry that I didn´t write sooner but I had a lot of work. :(
At first I wanted to read about Maksha and Kinjou. Simply I like this couple.
But I think that with Nimth and Brhanahadon may be more fun. Especially
when Nimth bites :)

Well this inbetween story is quite confiusing! At thia point I really don't know where you are taking us! But I have the impression that Fane will be very important in the future with Fate watching over him and all! I really want more to see where this is going! See you!!

Fane and Mahric seem very interesting characters and I would love (just like everyone else) to learn more about them and Fane's people. This story is so interesting. ^^

About the Dead, does it then mean that Dead is the god of all dead but not death in itself? Meaning he doesn't collect the souls or judge them, he just guides them to his daughter? And that he doesn't "choose" when someone dies but that is the "job" of one of his daughters?