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I would like to tell you that I have greatly enjoy this story and found that the english in your story to be good and very read able. The fact that your story has a lot more in it than sex is great.
I am sorry that I did not post to this effect before.

Its very depressing that your are deleting this story. I just started reading it today, and only got to chapter six, but I loved it. So the grammar wasn't the best but it was understandable, and I have read a lot worse. The storyline was awesome and very original, your characterizations were great, and there are hardly any good Naga stories on this website. :(

In the future, if you eventually reconsider keeping this story, maybe I could help with your story's grammar problems? Normally I hardly review stories, let alone offer to help but I love this story.

Demonic Darkness

minion_of_yaoi_and_darkness@yahoo.com

I know I just typed something, but I have more to say. I love your stories and absolutely insane without at least finding out how Thee Road Less Traveled ends. Do you have anywhere else I can find it? Please, I would do anything to be able to finish reading it. But I don't know German so I won't be able to finish reading if you only post it in German. Pleeaase, I'm begging you.

what? I like your stories sooo much! I can understand what it's like to write in another language (I did try to write an essay in spanish!) I'm also really disappointed that there was many reviews such as those saying you need to improve your english language when I knew that you did the best you could...

sheesh... I do hope that you will put those stories back up again and/or find a beta to help shape your stories in better ones.

Good luck and best wishes to you and I do hope everything will be okay in your life...

dachte mir wenn du schon aus Deutschland bist, versuche ich nicht meinen schrecklichen englisch grammatik zu überstrapazieren.^_^
Wollte nur sagen, dass ich deine Geschichten wirklich mag und es mir totaaal Led tut, dass manche Leute sich über deine Rechtschreibung und Grammatik beschweren. Kann es ehrlich gesagt nicht wirklich verstehen, da die meisten Geschichten hier einen viel schlechteren Grammatik haben und keiner beschwert sich, obwohl sie nur halb so gut geschrieben sind wie deine. Falls du die englische oder deutsche variante noch hochlädst würde ich mich wirklich super freuen!! Wenn du magst und es nicht zu umständlich wäre könntest du es mir auf mein mail adresse schicken? lya283@yahoo.de falls du kein Bock dazu hast oder es nicht tun kannst verstehe ich es natürlich auch. Es tut mir einfach nur total Leid, einer meiner Lieblingsgeschichten einfach nicht mehr weiter lesen zu können. Bewunderte immer wie gut du schreiben kannst, obwohl es nicht deine Muttersprache ist!!! Kann es als Ausländerin in Deutschland wirklich nachvollziehen wie schwer es ist!!

I love this fic and I cannot believe I'm going to be left without it just because someone decided to be a grammar nazi. Please, I'm begging you, don't take it down!! Please!!

Please don't stop writing! I LOVE your stories! They are such an interesting read and the characters are fun. Don't let stupid people get you down. If they can't even read your writing, which is only a LITTLE hard to read, then they are OBVIOUSLY lazy!! I can read your story just fine. That is what your brain is for! When things are a little out of order, it automatically reorganizes them. And if their brains don't do that then maybe they should get some more education!!! Even if I hating your stories, which I DON'T, I would still tell you to keep writing. You should not let low lives force you down! I support your stories. *hugs*
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No please don't remove your story from here. I love it! I've been waiting for your next chapter soo patiently. For a non native speaker, you write wonderfully. I consider you brave for that fact. If someone doesn't like your writing style they don't have to read your story. It's not like you are putting a gun to their head. I mean look at the number of people who have rated your story over a hundred. Many stories on this site don't have that many. So please don't stop.

I *Loooooooooooove* your stories!!! I was so happy to see them up,I thought they were an update.Then I read what happen and I cryed.I don't think your grammar and English is that bad,and your right you do have better English,grammar,and spelling then alot of English speakers who have stories here.I hope you will keep your stories up,I would love to know what happens next.Thee Road Less Traveled is one of my favorites.I absolutely love your stories and I'd go insane without at least finding out how Thee Road Less Traveled ends. Do you have it anywhere else I can find it? I don't know German so I won't be able to finish reading if you only post it in German.Please, I would do anything to be able to finish reading it.

I really, REALLY love your stories and thought that there was an update. Now I'm so sad! And it's my birthday.... TT^TT I've read a lot of stories that were written by a native English speaker that had a really bad grammar etc, yours is actually pretty good considering you're from Germany. (I've been to Germany just a few months back! I liked it there. ^^) Anyways, I hope you (pardon my language) screw those f*ckers and continue writing your story in English as well as in Germany. *puppy eyes* Maybe you could post your stories in another site? LiveJournal, DreamWidth (I have a free invitation code if you don't have an account already and want to join) DevianArt? Anything??? I'm being desperate here! :D I want to read your story till the end. Please?