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I wanted to review you, although I doubt it will stand out in your hundreds of notes, and let you know that I find this story amazing and hope you write more of it soon. I noticed it has been a while since you updated or worked on it, and hope you havnt abandoned it like so many authors under pressure do. You have a beautiful mind and expression towards the world that shows in this work, and I would love to see more of it soon.
Feeling a little sappy and depressed that I have finally read all the way to the most recent chapter, and have nothing left to read.
Hope your life is going well and hope to hear from you soon.

This story is at the top list of one of my favourites. I have read many original stories that are not so orignal, and I have yet to find one that surpasses yours. I understand that you think that your spelling isn't that good, and many people harp on that. But I must say that for someone who taught the english language to yourself, you are far better at writing it then most people, even if English is their first language. Either that or they don't bother to try and correct their mistakes.
After reading your story you inspired me to draw my own representation of what the characters would sort of look like. Afterwards I viewed your pictures and laughed because the only thing they have in common with yours, is the fact that they are naga and have braided hair. Oh well, it was only a ruff draft.
I know that you have a great talent for writing and am hopefull that you will continue it. You mentioned sometimes that your having beta problems, so if you ever need one, I will be more than happy to check your work.
Thanks for a fantastic story and Happy New Year.

Haven't heard anything from you in quite a while and am worried.
Hope you and your family are ok and doing well.
Miss you and your stories.
Had to go to your story in hopes of getting a message to you
which is fine I'll read your stories again.
46 anime luvr is also concerned and sends along with me hugs and loves
we miss you.
Nekos Megitsune and 46 anime luvr

Hi! I hope everything is OK with you and your family? I've gotten a bit worried since you haven't updated in a while. If it's because of betas, I could try my hand with it if you are willing. ^^ Wish you the very best and hope you'll have a great holidays. :) And thanks again for the fiction you wrote before. ^^

WONDERFUL! Can't wait for the next chapter.

Hello, I hope that you and your daughter are ok. I was a litte worried when you haven´t been
uploading recently. I miss your stories, so please even if the beta didn´t read it yet, I´d love to read the continue. :) *puppy eyes*
I´m looking forward the storie you promised to write for me when I won the competition.
Well I´m not really sure wheter you saw the message I wrote to you (it was from august the 17, I put there the pair I´d love it to be about).

I hope that you are updating your story soon.

I`ve realy started to love your stories and can`t get enogh of them!!! I`ve just finished reading through whats posted of this story and meersong, and can`t wait for you to post more. I was wondering, do you post as you write them or do you post on certain days?

Please bare with my long rambling, there is eventually going to be a point to it all!

First) don't let bigoted idiots get to you about writing. Americans (Hopefully I don't have to count myself in with the general populace) are the perfect example of people who can't write in English. English has degenerated in the states so much that it is hard for me to find a single good story nowadays. You have a great grasp on English, for being a German born-English-as-second-language person. (My family was originally from Germany, around the Kaizer army period before we came to America)

Secondly) I love your story. Its original and I especially love how you write the personalities of the characters without over, or under-doing it. You are a great writer. I understand writing for the love of it, and you shouldn't let others get you down. They're just jealous that they didn't come up with the idea of it. (Especially since you're thinking of your story between the constant running around of a child in the house).

Sorry if I rambled too much for your taste. I just wanted to tell you what I thought. My email address (the preferable one) is Grant29@mail.lcc.edu if you want to comment on... well, my comment.

Friend of a friend's friend.

Okay you have nearly given me a heart attack I had no idea that you had taken your stories off I haven't been able to get on here for a bit and if I had known I would still be crying. Never Never Ever let anyone put you down EVER you are way to good for that. As far as grammer please I have lived over most of the United States between me and my family and are scattered everywhere. I have known as much of a diversity as 2 senators and 3 movie stars to members in 4 different gangs in four different states. I have a sister who's a travel agent and she travels all over the place grammer is never easy anywhere. In fact I think yours is pretty good considering that most Americans grammer is horrifying and that includes the senators to the gang members have you ever heard an American speak let alone write nuff said now I am not talking everyone and you would be surprised how many don't even know how to read let alone write and we live in the decade 2000 sad isn't it worst part is we have no excuses at all as a people. Now personnally I am super impressed with you teaching yourself and bringing up an autistic child as well give your self a GREAT BIG HUGGY because not many people can do that I'm told but I also know that in this life you do what you gotta do period. You should NEVER give up your stories or anything else you feel passionate and special about there is a reason you have a wonderful imagination and special style and you have the love of it to share with the world you should never listen to naysayers or even professional critics do you know how many critics have been wrong over the years whether it's movies or books or whatever for every right critic you get about 50 wrong ones and even more if thier not professional. As far as anyone who doesn't like how someone writes then why are they reading stories over the internet anyway if they only like perfect grammer than they should only read published stories and even then they may be disappointed. Personnally I like this sight and these stories more they have much more imagination and I thank you for that besides my grammer pretty much sucks most of the time and I had a full 12 years grade, middle and high and a 2 yr. college degree now where is my excuse oops I guess it's just that we're all human right but that doesn't mean that anyone should put anyone else down right. I'm sorry this got so long but boy oh boy you scared me about not putting your stories up anymore that's like taking shakespeare out of a library because he wrote ye olde way instead of the old way ya know. Please don't punish the readers because some ding dong critic decided to try to dictate to you how or what to write never let anyone do that to a wonderful imaginative and fun writer such as yourself you are of a very small breed that needs to be treasured not berated. Please never leave us readers who do know how to appreciate great writers besides think of it this way shakespeare had some pretty mean critics to and he's still known and loved by many so now consider yourself one of the greats and just say "so there all you mean critics take that nah". And hug your little one massage your hand and let your imagination go towards infinity and write to your hearts content as long as we get to have the opportunity to read them. Thank you for it all.