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Love this story, I also like how it sounds written in english, as it is not your native language. You do a good job of it. Keep it coming!

I was so happy when I thought you updated! Now I'm so sad. Hope to see you soon non the less!

I miss you so very much
I hope one day you will continue The Road Less Traveled
I so much want to know what happens
Hope you and your daughter are doin well.
Nekos Megitsune and 47 anime luvr

Oh my god I am so happy, thrilled and shrieking in glory I am now doing my happy dance I thought maybe you had decided not to continue and I was so sad but you have brought thrill back thank you so much. I'm sorry if you have had such a hard time of it. It seems all my favorite stories authers are all having tough times so I guess I just have to keep my patience and hope. I love this chapter very interesting and I knew Fane would get together with Mahric. So that's where Mikahaelen ended up and Khalid is the druid with him how totally awesome is that. Unless I'm wrong of course which if I am oh well I mean with you amazing imagination I could very well be wrong but where ever you take this I can not wait to see. This story is so awesome so thank you for coming back and continuing with it because it always has so much exotic thrills and excitement and I never know what's gonna happen next.

I love all your stories.Please if you can Email them to me that would be grate. bastet_moon@hotmail.com

Dear Suryallee,
I just onece angain reread your wonderful story! I'm so on withdrawls that I always have to reread this fantastic fic! I really hope that your updating on Nyks bithday fic means that you will sometime update this story as well! At least I really hope so! Now back to the story I really what to know what Fanes secret is! And also what he found out about Khalid! Whats with him and his strange voice? And when do the three of them meet the dragon child (of with I allready forgot how to spell him^^ Thats the only problem I got when reviewing I really can't spell your charas ^^)? So I can only sit and wait and hope that you will someday continue this absoloutly fantastic story! Cause I so can't wait to see where this all is going! I really hope to see you again!!
Yours faithful smint45

Greetings Suryallee!

I just found this story today and before I knew it I've reached the latest chapter uploaded. So pardon me if I have not rated or given this interesting literary piece a review...until now, that is.

So, moving on...You really have a very remarkable - not to mention, very complicated - plot here. And with all the characters and tongue-twisting names, I sometimes wonder if you like, no, scratch that, love making things complicated. Your themes are great, too. Congratulations for that! And if not for the grammatical errors and a few mistakes in congruency and unity, this would've been a total rocker. Nevertheless, it's still a great piece. One observation, though: Why is it that when it comes to your notes at the end of chapters your English suddenly becomes better?

More power...and looking forward to the next upload. Ja ne...

Dee a.k.a lovelycrazy

i really hope you join this interesting story :)

i love this story. i hope there will be more soon.

Hey, Just wanted you to know that I really love this story but, like most English speaking readers, I find your writing difficult to read. So! I took the time to Beta a chapter as I read it. I've got your chapter eight corrected and I'd really like to Beta the rest of them for you in order to encourage you to continue writing. Please let me know if you would like me to send you this sample chapter. I can have the rest of your chapters Beta'd fairly quickly if you like what I've done to chapter eight.

Please know that I will continue to read your stories even if you choose not to accept my help. This is an amazing story and I love your Naga characters!

Sincerely,

Oakleaf