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O very excellent work! the plot and characters are amazing, and the detail you put into their interactions is very good! Once your beta fixes the grammar problems, this will be a AMAZING story!

Keep up the great work!

wonderful story

hmm.. i have a question. if Makshahiarass and Kinjou are life mates, than would it be that Makshahiarass will die "very young"? since humans don't live as long as nagas.

While it takes a couple extra seconds to decipher the correct formation of some of the sentances or figure out what you were really trying to say, the story was overall very interesting and the plot of the story made up for the disruption in flow

I really really really like this and eagerly await the story's development. Cessnal is also very cute XD

i'm always worried about starting a new story since i never know if it's going to be good or ever get finished, but i'm really happy with this story. the plot is very interesting and i enjoy the dynamics of hte characters. And yes, i can tell that you're translating from german to english since some of the mistakes are the type that happen because of differences found in sentence formation. However, the story is strong enough and interesting enough that i can look pass that and still really enjoy the tale you're spinning. I really hope you don't give up on this story and continue to provide this audience with captivating installments. I've already reread it twice XD. and cesnall and kinjou are <3333

Update soon please. ;D

Very well done, your story is amazing!

Can't wait till the next chapter.

Love this chapter too. I can't wait to read more. Your right the name is a mouthful. MAYBE when Makshahiarass starts his courting of our little uke human he will suggest that he just call him by maksha. cause it easier on the poor boy (and the author =) ) i can't wait to see how kinjou will react to the naga priest interest.

Great chapter. I want more like tomorrow but i will TRY to wait for when your ready. =D

oh i'm working on two naga stories of my own and don't know that much about snakes mind if i ask your advice when i get closer to publishing them here?

I liked our story very much. Don´t worry your grammar. There wasn´t too much errors.

I am developing a definite liking for this. Full of detail and lots of character description. I would love to beta it for you. Mail me if you are interested. HumanInfiltrator@yahoo.com

HI

Where do you come up with all these different types of naga. They make your story world feel so real and complete. I'm impressed and eager to see what happens next.

thanks for sharing.