rate_review Reviews

I love Nagas and so I really like this story! But the names are quite a hand full. I always forget who is who!!! And in the last chapters with all the gods, it was quite confusing. I hpe that will get clearer in the next chappies! When will the high priest claim him???? When will there be the yummy slash which is in the warnings??????????????????? I can't wait to see more!

I think I need a character chart @-@
There were so many new characters introduced in this chapter! It's a little hard to keep up with but I enjoy it none the less :)
I think Keevorass has left an impression on me, I woulden't mind seeing him with somebody before the story is out. I think I have a strange like for men who look big and tough, but are really just softies :D
Can't wait for the next chapter, please update soon, until then ~Passing Reader

Gah, I missed so many updates! :C
Anyway, keep up the good work! This story is getting awesomer by the chapter.

I just found this story and fell in love with it. ^^ Keep up the good work and I hope to get to read more of the story soon. :)

More! More! More! Update! Update! Update!

Amazing story! I had a blast reading this and can't wait for more!
Took me a bit to figure out what a Naga was hehe, so this is the first story that i've read with anything like that. I have to say that you made it a lovely experiance, and for being native German, your english is really good. Im able to read each chapter without being totally confused, though the beta-ing helps :)
Heres waiting for the next update, until then! ~Passing Reader

I love this story, I never found a story that I became so addicted to, before this one. I truly love all the characters even though I have trouble, pronouncing their names. I'm rooting for Kinjou and Makshahiarass to get together. I hope that you'll write the next chapter soon, I really love this story. The only problem I see in this story is some spelling errors so, if you need a beta to look over your stories, I will be happy to help you and look over your work for you so there will be no spelling errors in the future. Besides that, the story is very well-written and I find it be quite enchanting, I never read a story about Nagas and humans before.

Wonderful story and world you created. Post soon- I'm looking forward to it.

Your grammar and spelling is ok for a non-native speaker, but it can be a bit difficult to read sometimes.

i really liked this chapter :D the plot is really starting to develop on multiple fronts and i can't wait to see how everyone reacts to kinjou's new status. course i also hope to see what maksha plans to do. course i gotta wonder what cessnall is going to make of maksha (and maybe others) courting his mommy replacement and if kinjou's new status provokes any reaction from him.

hope to see more from you soon (and thank you for writing this and sharing with us) :D

Au

I feel for you i moved 3 time in the last 5 years