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Yay! A wonderful update! ^^ More more! :D I hope you'll get to the hot stuff soon... XD

Oh well I guess after this chapter I don't mind the missing smutt as long you go on with this wonderful magic!!!! You ideas are so wonderfull!! And I get slowly the cathch with the gods and the leadpriests. Thanks for the further explanation. I hope Jarod and Eerisaan get to meet Kinjou soon. I hope they get their magic back so they can teach him!!! I love this story and you never stop writing *till the end of time!!* Oh and I found you deviantart side your art is wonderfull! Now I can't decide what is better your art or your storys!! I love them both!! Hope you continue soon!!! Till next chapter!!

yay new chapter...and so fast....I´m so happy ^_^

wow, thank you XD

Thank you, Thank you, THANK YOUUUU!!!
I will definatly be using your charater chart, It was really helpful and explained alot!
I didn't know there were so many diffrent races of Naga. You could probibly do a story with each race if you wanted, though I think that's the fan girl in me talking. Ever since I read this fic I've had a very strong like for Nagas! *laughs*

It also helps with visualizing the land scape, I now know where the story is taking place! :D
As I said before thank you so much, I will put this to good use! I can't wait for the next chapter, though I imagion after that chart you want to rest your poor fingers ^-^'
Until next time! ~Passing Reader

Ohh Much better. I was a little keeping track or who was who and where things were. While you up date this chapter as the story moves along and we meet others and learn more words. What a beautiful world you have created. Are there any other creature beside elves, human and naga. Will you be using this world for any other stories like a saga?

thanks for all the great chapters.

I really like this story and want to know more. It needs some clean-ups in the language, but is still very good :3 You sure have put a lot of thought in this one. I like that! XD

great story like the plot

I love this story, I'm glad you continued it. Your art is amazing, if you ever wish to publish your work someday, I'll be honored to buy especially if you do the cover art and illustrations. I never found an original story that I enjoyed so much, I must have read your story so many times and I still love every second of it.

great chapter. I can´t wait what will happen next. pls update soon