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August 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for the wonderful chappie! I really try to use less ! But I can't promise. I really loved this chappie! Thank you so much for the fast update! I can't wait to read more about everyone!! I really hope to see you soon!
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August 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I kinda knew that konjou would meet his long-lost grandparents :)
wow another update! how often will you update? Anyway, looking forward to the next one and I suspect that this dragon child used to know Konjou. Will find out in next chapter if possible.
wow another update! how often will you update? Anyway, looking forward to the next one and I suspect that this dragon child used to know Konjou. Will find out in next chapter if possible.
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July 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
yay updates after long while!
looking forward to the next one.
looking forward to the next one.
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July 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That was really interesting!!!!!! I wonder what fate has in mind!!!! I hope nextime we will learn more about the necklace and of cause about Sencha and Nimith!!!!! Thank you for the fast update!!!!!! See you next time!!!!!!!
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July 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
great update
like the haft fox
and the other gods
like the haft fox
and the other gods
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July 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That chappie was wonderful!!!!! This fight was great Kinjous and Makshahiarass power combind is absoloutly great!!!!! They a such a perfect couple!!!!!! Did i get it right that Sheesshkass fought against Hammer and that he got away?? And Now we have a great alliance of gods against Hammer and his priests!!!!! That really gave us an insight into the relationships of the gods!!!!! And then Nimith!!! I love him as well as all you other caracters exept Hammer of cause!!!!!! I hope he does not get too ill!!!! And the new priest who jound us I think Sencha was his name is laso such a cute ball!!!!! I love them all!!!!! I can't wait for the next part!!!!! I love you story and I'm so happy that you are back!!!!!!! See you in the next chappie!!!!
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July 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yay! You updated! ^____^ And your eyes are better now! ^^ So happy to hear that. :) A really nice chapter once again, keep up with the good work. ^^
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July 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Thank you sooooo much for the update!!!!!!! I'm happy that you are better!!!! This chappie was fantastic!!!!!! I really like Nimth and the new Naga with the name I again can't remember!!!! But I think I've got to read the whole story again cause I have forgotten some thing which happend and so I don't fully get this chappie!!!!!! When I'm finished again you will get a better review from me!!!!!!
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July 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
yay, you´re back *happy*
thank you for wonderful upload
thank you for wonderful upload
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July 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Now I will give comments on some different chappies!!!!!!
8: Wow this gathering in the Naga Tempel seems to be the beginning to a huge alliance of the gods and their priests against Hammer!!!! He really seems to have pissed of many of the gods!!!!! I sit possible that Kinjou is the grandchild of the snowelv who had been taken at the first slavery wave??? Well that would at least explain the blond hair of him!!!!!
9/10: Kinjous power is incredible!!!!!!!!! And now he can live as long sa the wood and he can be together with the headpriest (with the terible name I cant spell!!!!) forever!!!!! As long of cause the get this Hammer problem solved!!!!!
11: Makshahiarass is great as a teacher ( did I mention that his name is terrible to spell?? I always have to copy and paste it!!!) Kinjou is so special hearing him and remembering his awaking ;) I love him and Makshahiarass!!!!!!Aw Kijou is so niee comforrting him!!!!! And how he protects him!! And noww he has the power to protect him eaven more!!!!! Have I mentioned I love him :) Wow whats with his evil side!!! It robably is good if he needs to protect the ones which are dear to him!!!! Sheesshkass is so seducive !!!!!! I really like him too!!!! And Finally we get to the smutt!!!! Very nice!!!!! I love naga smutt!!!!!!! I'm probably right in stating that these twonaga mean great trouble!!!! It seem they are constantly getting more problems!!!!
12: Kinjou is so powerfull and so intelligent just the opposite of what you thought of him in the beginning where he seemed so vurneable!!! Plus his dark side I think he can be really dangerous (with his spying and all) if he wants!!!!!! I really like the scene where Makshahiarass sees he power in him and perhaps just a slight glance at the darker part of him!!!!!I can'T wait for the druids to directly meet Kinjou and to beginn their teaching!!!!!
14: Nimith is really interesting!!! Are the fox demons a nother part of their allys against hammer??? I really hope that Nimith and Brhanahadon get to be together they are really a nice couple!!!!!
I know that this whole review is a bit uncoordinated but I wrote it parallel to reading and to everything I had to put my two cents in *grins wikedly* I hope you understand what I mean!!!!
But I must say after reading you whole wonderful story again I finall totally understand the last chappie!!!! Because of these difficult naga names I forgot who was who and totally confiused the patisipants!!!! Now everything makes sense!!!!! I really hope you soon will let Kinjou and his teachers meet in honest!!!! I can't wait to see what they are thinking of him!!!! And I also can't wait for the teaching to beginn!!!!! They really get more into trouble with each cheppie!!!! I hope they will be able to solve all the problems and get all the different allys under one hat!!!!! Can't wait for the next update!!!! Hope that this time it doesn't take so long!!!!! See you in the next chappie!!!!
p.s. Sorry that this rieview is so long :)
8: Wow this gathering in the Naga Tempel seems to be the beginning to a huge alliance of the gods and their priests against Hammer!!!! He really seems to have pissed of many of the gods!!!!! I sit possible that Kinjou is the grandchild of the snowelv who had been taken at the first slavery wave??? Well that would at least explain the blond hair of him!!!!!
9/10: Kinjous power is incredible!!!!!!!!! And now he can live as long sa the wood and he can be together with the headpriest (with the terible name I cant spell!!!!) forever!!!!! As long of cause the get this Hammer problem solved!!!!!
11: Makshahiarass is great as a teacher ( did I mention that his name is terrible to spell?? I always have to copy and paste it!!!) Kinjou is so special hearing him and remembering his awaking ;) I love him and Makshahiarass!!!!!!Aw Kijou is so niee comforrting him!!!!! And how he protects him!! And noww he has the power to protect him eaven more!!!!! Have I mentioned I love him :) Wow whats with his evil side!!! It robably is good if he needs to protect the ones which are dear to him!!!! Sheesshkass is so seducive !!!!!! I really like him too!!!! And Finally we get to the smutt!!!! Very nice!!!!! I love naga smutt!!!!!!! I'm probably right in stating that these twonaga mean great trouble!!!! It seem they are constantly getting more problems!!!!
12: Kinjou is so powerfull and so intelligent just the opposite of what you thought of him in the beginning where he seemed so vurneable!!! Plus his dark side I think he can be really dangerous (with his spying and all) if he wants!!!!!! I really like the scene where Makshahiarass sees he power in him and perhaps just a slight glance at the darker part of him!!!!!I can'T wait for the druids to directly meet Kinjou and to beginn their teaching!!!!!
14: Nimith is really interesting!!! Are the fox demons a nother part of their allys against hammer??? I really hope that Nimith and Brhanahadon get to be together they are really a nice couple!!!!!
I know that this whole review is a bit uncoordinated but I wrote it parallel to reading and to everything I had to put my two cents in *grins wikedly* I hope you understand what I mean!!!!
But I must say after reading you whole wonderful story again I finall totally understand the last chappie!!!! Because of these difficult naga names I forgot who was who and totally confiused the patisipants!!!! Now everything makes sense!!!!! I really hope you soon will let Kinjou and his teachers meet in honest!!!! I can't wait to see what they are thinking of him!!!! And I also can't wait for the teaching to beginn!!!!! They really get more into trouble with each cheppie!!!! I hope they will be able to solve all the problems and get all the different allys under one hat!!!!! Can't wait for the next update!!!! Hope that this time it doesn't take so long!!!!! See you in the next chappie!!!!
p.s. Sorry that this rieview is so long :)