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That was one incredible sex and bond. Oh I want to see Kinjou and Maksha´s baby.
Will he be more nagaling or human child? And will he born or hatch? Can Maksha as diamond naga choose when he wants to have a child?

sorry for pushing you to write more all the time, but your story is like a drug for me :)
I hope that your daughter is better ^_^

Hey its nice that you're back and well. I love the way that you did this last chapter. I was wondering how you were going to get them together since he seems to have fears and doubts and all that this was gorgeous. I can't wait for more.

This was really interesting!!!! It tells us a lot about history!!! And the gods!!!1 I really see a bad omen in the end and i hope thet the alliance of the gods can suffice against the caos gods!!!! I think you are right this is developing into an epos but I Love it!!!! I really hope to see you with part two soon!!!!!

Is Kinjou part cat demon or part god??? I have been wondering what Kinjou's father is,you said that he is a shaman and is from Beorantar's people but you never said what his races were.Since,you did not say I thouth that mayby he was half humun (since Beorantar's people are humen) and half something eals,you have been leving cules to this. The thing with Kinjou's eyes/his darker side and other things,your most resent cules is form the character chart, you have him donw as two thirds human and one-third elf and that had me thinking more that his father is a half-breed or something eals.Then I read the part about Kitaereh and thouth alot of things.Kinjou has alot of Kitaereh's trates wisdom,peaceful,calm and well-balanced,and only gets murderous when angered too much like that time in the flash back when thoese men hurt Cessnal and a part of his dark side is shown.When I read about the part of how Kitaereh can turn into the dark goddess of retribution, vengeance and penalty and how she is normally a calm and well-balanced goddess that only gets murderous when angered too much,she also, mostly stays out of the other gods quarrels and tends to be on the neutral side of the pantheon,it made me thing of Kinjou and his dark side it's just like if he turns into the dark goddess(or god in his case) of retribution, vengeance and penalty.Then I think who is Little Paws? and when was murdered? how old was he? did he have any kids? is he Kinjou's father? how is it all conneted? I can't wait to find out!!!

Wow, what a chapter!. I like the old Brhanahadon and his naughty fox halfling's antics but everything was shadowed by the love scenes between Maksha and Kinjou we were all expecting like from the very begining! xDD. I specially loved the 1st part, the two of them caught in a world of their own not minding one bit they were in a very public place and in front of the temple's VIP guests (even Kinjou's granpas!). That scene was very, VERY hot. I hadn't realized how good sex with Nagas could be... *is envious*.

I think this is my 1st review, how ungrateful!. I've been reading the story on and off since the beggining but the quick updates and interesting characters made me come back and actually comment for once ^-^ . I often get confused with the names, places and order of the events (specially the chapters with the guests arrival) but it's problably a problem with the naga/german/english/spanish mental translation needed to follow the plot xDDD.

Let's see, what else... Ah!, my fav characters are Maksha, Kevorass, Aoras and the Naga avatar, and all the people they interact regularly (meaning Kinjou, Cessnal, etc). I miss Maltaan too!.

Poor Kinjou! He was so scared and understandably so... :(

And I love your plot with this story (which is why I always wait so impatiently for the next chapter :D) so I'll wait patiently for the smut to happen... ^^

Thanks for the chapter! :)

I really liked this chapter and the special relationship between Auros and Kinjou it's so much like brothers and it is so sweet and honest I really like Auros he is so smart and sensitive yet strong just the kind of friend Kinjou needs and with what the two have been through I'm glad you didn't partner them but did give them a special relationship thank you can't wait for the next chapter.

Thank you for the update!!!!!I really liked this chappie!!! And I hope that Kinjou will get it together again!!!!! I really like him and Markis (how was he spelled again?) well anyway, I really like both of them!!!!! And I want them together again!!!!! But I think that the Naga are not the only dangerous thing out there!!! Probably Kinjou himself is really dangerous if you push his buttons as we saw in his past!!!!! So I think they really fit nicely!!! They are both dangerous when necessary and will do everything to protect their loved ones!!!!! I think Kinjou should think back at that time when he killed the one that hurt the little one and then he will se the similarities between them!!!!!! I hope they have an all out talk in the next chappie!!!! Cause I don't like Kinjou beeing afraid of (now you can put in this terrible name again!!)!!!!!!! I can't wait for the next chappie!!!! See you!!!!

Okay I have been reading on this site for awhile but your story is one of the ones that finally convinced me to join. I love your story which is strange considering that I hate snakes and they scare the hebejebes out of me but yours are wonderful. I love Kinjou and what you have done with him it's fascinating and exciting and the fact that Mak?????? loves him is so neat. It is such an unusual and totally out there story that i't's amazing. I even love all the other characters and the interactions of them all. I can't name them all but it's fantastic. I can't wait for Mak and Kinjou's relationship to heat up with all that passion and love it should be amazing I also would love it if Kinjou got pregnant soon that to would be awesome especially Mak's reaction to it I can just see how obsessed and protective he'd get with Kinjou even more so than now how cool. The war also sounds fascinating can't wait to see what happens there with all these gods. It would be cute to see little Cessnal going from protective big brother to jealous big brother and everything in between. But I know I'm getting ahead of myself and the last chapter was fascinating thank you and no it was not to gory it was inspirational to read something so different besides those jerks deserved what they had coming to them.
I hope you update soon I love this story thank you.

holy cow that was awesome. i definatly didn´t see that coming, but still that was really cool.