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Cool you have me totally intrigued with who and what Fane is and how could anyone hate you for killing off a character it was sad but beautifully written isn't that what counts. I wonder how Fane will get Mahric to do what ever he has to do I also wonder exactly what that is I can't wait to find out. I also can't wait to see Kinjou Aika and the dragon boy all get back together again I love reunions of old friends not seen for a long while. It's usually like everyone has changed and then again not. It's funny about Maksha possessiveness how he says he won't share yet he has no choice Kinjou has to many others who love and need him to so he'll be forced to share like it or not and that is a good thing because no one should possess another ever. I hope I hear more on Narken and Soratim I can't wait till they have sex that should be something especially if and with his personality I can see it Narken was very resistant to it until his own lustful needs take over and finally give in and I can see Soratim getting a little rough and insistant with him until that happens and then turn loving and considerate that would be so awesome it would be so hilarious if Narken got pregnant especially with his personality to see him go through the signs and symptoms of pregnancy god how funny he would be such a piss off all the time especially with mood swings laughing over wierd stuff and crying at nothing talk about totally confusing and befuddling himself and Soratim trying to keep him from getting upset or losing his temper or going off half cocked over some silly nonsense but I'm sure what ever you do in this story is going to be totally awesome and I can't wait to read more and more. Thank you again ever so grateful for the distraction to reality.

I really want to know who are those naga strangers
Heh...dragon child is cute too :)

Oooh! It more than satisfied me! ^_____^ I never would have seen that one coming... And I have to say that it sounds quite satisfying way for the both of them to have sex... But that sure explains a lot, I mean some of them (or was it all of them?) having two penises. :D Does this mean that Makshahiarass will have a baby? O_o Anyways, I'm so happy for them! :) I really like how the plot thickens and moves on. Keep up the awesome work!

P.S. Can I say something about grammar that has been bugging me for a while? Sorry if this sounds impolite but do you mean that one of the gods is Dead, like when someone dies and is dead, or Death (the Grim Reaper) which means the thing that makes people dead? I don't know if I got my meaning across as English isn't my first language...

You are amazing I love this story it is so exciting and fascinating. I especially love the pairings you made Maksha and Kinjou love em love em, and Saksha and Krinton how sweet it is and Soratim and Narken wow neat and Nimth and Brhanahaden or whatever his name is amazing I love them all and I can't wait to see how it all progresses. I love the mating of Maksha and Kinjou in the last chapter very intriguing. I re-read the story again to see if I missed to much the first time I did a little so I'm glad I did. I love this later one to awesome totally I am so glad Kirin's father survived and it is so cool to have Mik the dragon there although it does make sense since he would consider Kinjou and Aika as his family and to dragons that's their whole world. And his reactions to Kinjou and Maksha's pairing beautiful and cute. Fate doesn't really seem all that mad or crazy just very eccentric which is always confused with crazy. All gods I figure are loony at least to normal people but that's only because of the power and responsiblity they wield and that would make any one loony. It sounds like Hammer has released the powers of chaos and another very dangerous and powerful entity which I'm sure he will sorely regret and have it bite him in his ass in the end but not before causing alot of grief and destruction first. I think Maksha should be glad that Kinjou knows so many powerful and good beings and people who adore and love him I think they all will need everyone of them by the end of this next horrible war. But it would not surprise me to find that Kinjou would be the most powerful if only just by his link with them all through his caring for them and vice versa. It would make sense for Mik not to be upset for being underground I mean he did live in a pit for a long time and that was underground. I really like Soratim and Narken they are such an interesting combination and so hot. And Brhahahden or whatever and Nimth so beyond cute. Thank you so much also if you could let me know when you update it would be awesome my email is above but just in case it's brzachman@yahoo.com. Thank you Thank you for your imagination.

Mahric - chapter 13
And there is always Mahric… however, it will keep him from attacking them long enough to settle the things and you know that too.”

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Interesting chapter you just make this story more and more fascinating I can't wait to read more waiting extremely anxiously.

Who were Fane´s people actually?

That was great! Thank you! Maksha and Kinjou are such a sweet couple! It seems the trouble will not end! I hope they will resolve this whole crisis! TThis chappie again gives us a few clues to compleate the picture but I think we will not see all the pieces till much later! And I think when that time comes we have to read you whole wonderful story again to understand everything! But I love it that way so I hope you keep up spreading the hints like the crumbs from Hansel and Gretel! I really want the next chappie! Thank you so much for the update and see you next time!

uh-oh.... i think kinjou won't like it when he find out what happened the next morning or something...

Finally Maksha and Kinjou got together! That was by far the bet Naga sex I've ever read! So wonderful written and so HOT! I absoloutly loved it! I hope we get more of that in the future! And the quarreling of Brhanahadon and the avatar was so funny! I really laughed my ass off! Literally! I really hope to hear from you soon! And I think I need to stress again I LOVE THAT YOU ARE BACK AND I LOVE YOUR STORY!!!!
P.S Aw in the last reviews I forgot again that I should use less !!!! I'm so sorry it's a habit of me to show the autor how much I like the story and I love yours so damn much!!!! Aw again sorry! I really will try to behave myself!