rate_review Reviews

Hi, me again, another awesome story. I am sorry it was a oneshot but loved it anyway.
I will keep my fingers crossed you will write more about Thorn and Wolf. Misty.

Much potential, but 'Cat and Mouse Games' contains numerous grammatical errors that make it difficult for the reader to enjoy the story. It seems I am forced into reading each sentence at least twice just so I can understand what is happening. Also, I found that the double-spacing of each sentence threw me off immensely, making reading a frustrating task. This is merely constructive criticism, so try not to be offended. Overall, I found the story's plot to be delightful and entertaining. I hope you would continue futher newly 'revised' chapters.
jaden