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January 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I think you're doing a fantastic job. I feel so bad for Anna, but I can't help but love that sex scene... ;) The aftermath was amazing, along with the "Lying" chapter because you did a wonderful job showing Anna's anguish from the assault. Please continue when you get the chance! :)
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January 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow! This is really nice! It is very well written, and it is beautifully done too... I wish I wrote this well! It was a lot of fun to read, and I really love your story so far... it kinda turned me on and I am exctited to see what might happen next (are you gonna write more?)! I'm eventually going to do a lesbian scene or two in my story, although I am a little nervous about it! This was beautifully written, and a fun read! Thank you for sharing it with us!
~Mandy
~Mandy
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January 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i like the way that she is put between her duties as a daughter and mother and her own diginty. i think this story can go far if you have the time to elaborate. kudos love the way shes nothing but a tool and has to put her love of music away in her heart to sell her body to a demon with the all mighty dollarXD
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December 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
not bad keep updating