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Crap! I read this a few days ago while I was in a funk (trust me I never review when I'm in a mood cause even when I love the story I'm just not in the mood to say much) and forgot to come back and review! Bad Pester!! What can I say? All of your stories are just so great. This one was no exception. I absolutely loved Gabe. He was so cute and cuddly and adorable. Tobias was too sexy for words. I just wanted to eat them both up! Or watch them eat one another up! Either way what fun! I was bouncing in my seat when Tobias walked over and kissed Gabe in front of those girls!! It was like, 'Yeah! Take that! How dare you eyeball Tobias when Gabe's sitting right there!' And they both were in love with each other and neither could tell the other. So bittersweet and of course I was just mush by the end. The phone call from Tobias' mom cracked me up. It made me very very very curious as to what Tobias had said to her about Gabe that she made the assumption they were in 'that' kind of relationship. How much would I have to do to bribe you for a little oneshot involving the family Christmas party? Man what I wouldn't do to be a fly on that wall! God only knows what Tobias' mom would tell Gabe!! Love this story though and I'm not sure how I overlooked it before. Now it's finished!! But thanks for all your hard work and hopefully things will go better for you now!! You're one of my favorite authors on this site so tell your computer that Pester said to behave! Love ya! I'll be keeping an eye out on some of the other things you have up. This story was great though. I'll probably come back and reread it when I have a bit of spare time.

Finally got around to reading the last few chapters, glad I did.

I liked the build up to the final few chapters. I think those two boys were going to explode from
the sexual tension between them long before they did anything. LOL

Couple times I was confused about who the other was taling about, but just stopped and thought about
it a moment and continued reading.

All in all a conderful, cute story. Loved it.

Awwww, I'm sorry to see this story end; it was so cute and sweet! I really like the dynamic between Gabe and Tobi; I'm glad they found each other. Great writing! (I also love your other stories!) Happy 4th!

Aww,this was a great chapter; poor Angel, passing out, or not so poor Angel, hahahha. Anyways, love the story, love the sweetness of both Tobi and Angel. Love the different POV's, looking forward to your next chapter!

These two are just too cute. Seriously. XD This fic is just so... fluffy and sweet. Like cotton candy. Me, I prefer cocoa. lol X3

I'd love to see the second half of the chapter. All this build-up is killing me. *squirm* X3

I was so excited to see this story was updated!!!!! I thought you had forgotten about it....I'm so glad you didn't! I love this story. They are so sweet together, and like I said in my last review, I LOVE the different POV's b/c you then know what the other is thinking. Which you don't get to do in most stories. I hope you finish the chapter!

Jeez, I wrote a lengthy review and when I pressed the review button, the screen blanked out! So, I'm starting over. Your story is extremely sweet; the feelings they have for one another such a secret to the other. Does that even makes sense? Anyways...your writing is wonderful! So descriptive, the different POV's; I love that! The kissing scenes made me feel like I was in the room with them, experiencing what they were experiencing. Amazing! You have a wonderful way w/words; I can't believe this is your first fiction. And btw, your second chapter; awesome for someone who was so tired and falling asleep. hahaha Great job, I can't wait to read more.

Awwww~! Angel is so sweet, and Tobi is just the right amount of wicked, so I can't help but love him! XD Actually, I love 'em both! X3 I'm a little sad to see that there's only two actual chapters, but I totally understand wanting to take things at your own pace. =3 It's how I roll, too. X3 lol

I'll be looking forward to the next chapter! ^w^

HI! Me again! I probably shouldn't put this here, so you can delete this review right away, but I had to thank you! That comment about the comma in my fic was from my beta and I had missed it during my formatting process. I'm so embarrassed XD! Thanks a bunch!

~Chloe~

I read this the other day when it was posted, but just now getting a chance to review.
I love your writing style, you have a way with words that puts the reader right there
in that room/scene.

Tobi's mother knows him better than he knows himself. She has noticed the chemistry
between Tobi and Angel long before they did. I bet she will also notice a difference
in them during dinner. Lots of great lines here, to many to mention.

Yes and the steamy scene...hehe, love how Angel can go from a blushing boy to almost
demanding in one breath.

Love it!!! Update soon!!!