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December 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
yes! another chapter! haha im excited like a little kid on christmas :)
great one, keep going!
great one, keep going!
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December 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Will Roarke and Dani be able to hold off until the case is solved? If they don't will they get found out and compromise the investigation? Its a shame that I can't work up more empathy for Brand. He and Mayan could be really bitter sweet. Two scarred souls healing each other and all that. I'm not sure sociopaths actually feel for other people though. Brands got a LOT of healing to do just to reach human again. Great story.
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December 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I was just thinking and hoping to see sparks flying between dani's girlfriend and roarke's partner and here it is...! I am so looking forward to see more explosive things to happen.
Pls keep it up. I really enjoy this story. :-)
Pls keep it up. I really enjoy this story. :-)
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December 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow...
great chapter
the start was kinda disturbing but it wouldnt have been so good without that part
and the end!
i cant wait how larkin is going to react to the whole media thing now :)
great chapter
the start was kinda disturbing but it wouldnt have been so good without that part
and the end!
i cant wait how larkin is going to react to the whole media thing now :)
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December 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Dani figuring out her abilities is interesting.
maybe Fielding will finally get some lovin.
can Brand and the "clients" just get run over by a bus already... ugh. that scene at the beginning was really hard to read.
maybe Fielding will finally get some lovin.
can Brand and the "clients" just get run over by a bus already... ugh. that scene at the beginning was really hard to read.
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December 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sorry I haven't reviewed later...home for the holidays...but just wanted to let you know that I am still reading Unfair Advantage, as well as your other updated stories and I treat them like a little holiday gift...thanks again for sharing...you truly make the holidays nice and cozy...I'll review as often as I can until I get back home to my wireless. Thanks for everything ;)...I'll let you know about my story...this well give some time to work on it and I'll email you later about it. You rock!
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December 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
YES!
two more chapters =D
cute puppy :)
two more chapters =D
cute puppy :)
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December 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Okay I'm hooked. Although I'm still looking forward to you continuing Beyond Temptation, I am really enjoying this. Great suspense and sexual tension.
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December 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
damn this is so good!
more, more, more! please. :D
more, more, more! please. :D
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December 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
There are readers who make all the sacrifice and toil vanish. You two are certainly among them.
Slapping up chappies!
KD
Slapping up chappies!
KD