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by KristinaDalton

schedule January 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
love reading new chapters of this story. so intriguing...i can't get enough of them. thanks for the update date!
person M M
schedule January 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Krap! Daves gonna get busted! I hope he doesn't of course, but it has great tension. Dani seems to be getting stronger through all of this, and that will make everything more interesting as things move along. As for Brand...., he seemed to be making some emotional progress, but the "twisted" part left me worried. Its not necessarily bad, but it felt ominous. Mayan, may be in deep trouble.
schedule January 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
this whole mayan and brand story line is love? i mean does he love her because it seems as though at times he might...i guess the question is, can a man who does these bad things fall in love...this almost brings a more human quality to him...i guess this is how serial killers get you...but he's doing all of this for profit, so does that still make him a sociopath or psychopath or what...i don't know...this is truly a psychological drama. great job!
person Dreamie
schedule January 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Keep 'em coming, KD! You're making my recovery from surgery that much better! Thanks for the great story!
person M M
schedule January 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ah, emotions always cloud everyones perspective. Will they cause Brand to slip up? Things are getting juicy all around.
person Anon
schedule January 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wow, good one!
suspense makes cold winter days bearable. please update, hibernation period is long :D
schedule January 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Dani better watch out...Larkin is so masculine, sexual and oozing sensuality...he is going to rock hr world!
person M M
schedule January 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ooh! Daves in deep doo. I hope he doesn't get caught. Great chappie.
schedule January 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wow this story is so good!
yay! finally Roarke and Dani got it on. very hot.
wait she said it was a mistake, is she crazy?
I have this terrible feeling that Dave is bound to get caught.
can't wait for more.
schedule January 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I am so into this story. But I have to tell you that at times it freaks me out so much that I have to watch something funny before I go to sleep. You imagery is amazing!