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April 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Okay, I know its only been two weeks; but I'm home, sick, stuck in bed. So, I'm back to beg early. Please update.
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April 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
A very well written suspense/mystery. I found it purely by accident but I'm glad that I did. You should consider publishing at other free fiction sites. I can't wait to read the rest. Kelly
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April 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wow intense, definitely has my heart beating...can't believe tim was shot...hope he's ok.
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April 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
My poor fingers are getting sore from hanging off of this cliff you left. Please update soon. I can't wait to see how she handles Brand!
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April 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Okay really, how long can you ratchet the tension up? For three chapters now its only gotten more intense. A little super natural help did come! Maybe something else will get called up to help. Or maybe Roark will just shoot him. Please don't make me wait a month to find out.
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April 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Still enjoying this story very much, but need more! Please update soon!
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March 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
oh come on!
I have to know what happens next!
I have to know what happens next!
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March 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Well go ahead Dani...I enjoy her because she seems to be a strong woman who doesn't wait to be rescued...she formulates her own plan.
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March 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You have left us with quite a cliff hanger here! Please don't forget those of us who are hanging by our fingertips.
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March 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Ask and you shall receive! Thanks for the update. This is quite another cliffie you've left here. How long 'til Roark makes it to her house? And how long 'til he figures out her little clue? I can't wait to see how you manage to get her out of this!