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October 1, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Could be a good story!
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November 18, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I am in love with this story! The characters are wonderful and very interesting! Please continue!
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January 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I know in the first chapter you advised the focus be on the dialogue as opposed to the characterization, but I'm intrigued by both. Jamie's character is entertaining in a troubled and uncomfortable way (for Ayden, I'm sure ;)). I like their interactions and how human Ayden is, despite how professional he's trying to be (until the most recent chapter, that is). Please, please, please post more! I look forward to it :)
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November 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. With the psychic powers, murders, and the sexual tension! Its a perfect combination. Please continue to write, I cant wait to see if these two get together, or if Jamie gets out.
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February 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
love it
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February 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting.. I like it so far.. There are alot of different direction you can go with this.. Good Job!!
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January 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i really like the storyline
its unpredictable and interesting
making me want more :)
its unpredictable and interesting
making me want more :)
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January 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I would love for you to update this. It's a great start.
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December 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i really like this fic! i think its interesting and well written.
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December 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Omigosh! So yummy! I'm so greedy, more plz? ^ ^