rate_review Reviews

Hey hun, it's me, your all time favorite person in the world. Alright, first order of business! I think your imagery and feelings in this piece is wonderful, but sweetheart, you CANNOT end it there! This had the potential to be a really good full length story if you develop the characters and the story and the world its in. I see a lot of things that could happen with this, so don't just leave it there alright? TWO! uh....you rock! Sorry, I guess I only had the one point after all XD. Anyway, can't wait to see the special thing you're writing for me **nudge nudge** welcome to the site!!!

Loves and huggles,
Murray the leprechaun