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for Just the Night.

by bellesang

schedule February 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG OMG OMG PLEASE update this soon!! I've never read a story like this and I like this one so far. I wanna know what happens next!
schedule December 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh this is good! I don't have a clue what is going on, but that just makes it even better.
schedule December 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
WOW K is a god of chaos! never saw that coming Brilliant. Glad you decided to make this more then a oneshot and include rome view. can't wait for the next chapter.

thanks for sharing.
schedule December 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh no! This is terrible!
But K will come and rescue him. :D
I am positive of that.
Because... you wouldn't be quite so mean to me, now would ya?
:)

This is very good. I love your writing style.
Best of luck writing your next chapter!
I look forward to reading it.
person Saminada
schedule December 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Gosh! What does he want from Rome??? I he evil?

Man,I can't wait to read more of this! Thanks alot for the update! :D

I wonder if K will find time in time or not? hummm
person kiix
schedule December 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Cool. I like it. I wasn't expecting K to be a god but hey, it works. As for your original intension, if this is were your muse wants to run, let it. You might end with a beautiful precious gem of a story...you got the start of one.

More please

Kiix
person Tristram
schedule December 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Vampire...God...either way I think it's great and hope you continue soon.
person Tristram
schedule December 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really liked your story and definitely think you should continue. If you do I think it would be best to go back a little, explain how they met and who they are.
schedule December 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It's agreat stand alone, but an even better entrances to a creative story.
You left me with too many questions that need answering. I'm sure the first everyone wants to know: WHAT IS K? Demon? Vampire? Something else of your own creation? What is Rome scared of? ( by the way love the characters names) What does K stand for? How did they meet? Can't we have some of Rome's point of view please?

Over all i really like the whole story. I'm looking forward to reading more. Thank you for sharing it.
person JaceQuin
schedule December 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like it. It wasn't what I was expecting from the description but I still enjoyed it very much. I wish you would continue. I want to know what K is. I think this could be something interesting. *leaves you a fancily stacked pile of fudge*