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December 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG this chapter made me start to panic... I'm almaost afraid to read the next...I got this feeling it's gonna get very VERY bad... like... deadly... aaaaarrrgggh! It was so creepy the way his guard was all 'nice', and... well, very VERY well written!
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December 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It's plainly scaring.And very well done ! update soon.Aida
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December 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Alright we've got the abuse now when is the rescuing coming? I for one can't wait for someone to come get him. This is depressing but addicting. You do great with descriptions.
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December 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
excellent work! truly luved reading both of these chapters. keep up the good work, i can't wait to see where Antonio's and Devin's relationship goes!
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December 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Soooo cruel! Damn, you can write things dark... ;o)I wonder if there's any light in this ones future? No hint of it yet... Can't wait for the next chapter... and I'm equally eager for the next chapter of Nemo!
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November 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
the only problem I can foresee is that this is too delicious to be so short. Please rectify this situation asap. Thank you.
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Kiix
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Kiix
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November 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This sounded interesting in the description, and then I got so surprised it was by you! Love Nemo too, though, so don't forget it! Oh, and this is just what I like! BAAAAAD me! ;o)
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November 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh god the poor boy. He doesnt have a relationship with his master does he? I mean a relationship with feelings like care and love etc. I suppose not... poor boy. But if he is 18 he could flee couldnt he? please update soon
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November 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great new story, I'm anxious for more.