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for Forgotten

by traxie

person kiix
schedule January 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oooh. I like this. Dark and hopeless. Can really feel for Devin. He's definately got the better the devil you know attitude than to try and change something for the unknown. Too bad Oscar got wasted. It probably was the master - sadistic dink he is. Now we have to wait with Devin in the dark until you next update. Hurry!!!!

Bye the by = thanks for the favs listing!!!

Locked in the trunk of a car = song by the Tragically Hip which I will be listening to until the next time your muse attacks.

Keep up the good work!
person tdorian
schedule January 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
It's always a painful experience to read this chapter.It phisycally hurts...And I still want more.I don't know what it says about me...lol Aida
person ceedee
schedule January 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Just when I thought Devin dead- Saved by the younger guy and his family-
whats going to happen now? Did the sob master die- I hope so! though Oscar wasnt much better
person J42
schedule January 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the update! Love the rescue scene - and am bummed that Oscar's out too. Nicely done. Thanks again.
schedule January 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
O_O NUUUUU!!! DUN KILLS HIIIIIM!!!!! XD Gah! You and your suspenseful cliffies! lol I love it tho =P UPDATE SOON!
person angelmay
schedule January 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like it so far, keep up the good work.
person wynja
schedule December 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Shiiiiite! THis was what I was afraid of! And I have no bloody idea if you are really going to kill him or not! THat's scary! For most writers you have an idea what they will 'let' happen to their characters, but with you... NO idea! AAAAARRRGGGHHH! Scary! ;o) Oh, I DO hope you get some ideas about Nemo soon! As I've said, I'm all for him being sold, at least for a little while... or ALMOST sold... or something... I do think it should get worse before he is rescued... I really want to see what a vampire looking for a pet would be like! -grin- I don't think I want it quite as dark as this, though, because Nemo I've gotten to KNOW... -hugs him- I just wanna hurt you a LITTLE bit, Nemo-boy... that's okay, isen't it? ;o)
person reighchama
schedule December 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
so, this has taken a semi un excepted turn of events. just wow. i def feel bad for the new boy, knowing you pain will still be instore for a while until happiness comes later:P

looking forward to it
person Tristram
schedule December 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was so intense and such a wicked cliff hanger! I hope you update soon I need to know what happens
person Shivawn
schedule December 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ohhh, so Oscar actually HAS a heart! At first, I thought the entire situation was hopeless for Devin...it might be still but...now at least, I like to think SOMEONE is being nice to Devin XD I love this story! :D I can't wait until you update again!