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for Forgotten

by traxie

person blueberry
schedule January 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG this stuff is so tense. I'm starting to think that Snake isn't so bad but i still want Devin to get a happy ending so pleeease keep writing!!
person gillie
schedule January 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great story!! I check every day for updates. Have re-read this story several times, and each time it just gets better!!!!! Yumm. Thanks so much for all your hard work.
schedule January 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*pouts and scoops up poor Devin, cuddling him close* Poor wittle guy! He needs lovin, not more brutal violence =( I wanna beat all those dudes who keep hurting him! >< He's not an enemy! He's a victim just like that other boy! Grrrrrr...

XD As you can see, I'm really getting into this story. The emotions are there! lol Update whenever you can mate! I'll be waiting ^_^
person wynja
schedule January 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Dark indeed! But I was hoping it just wouldn't be happiness from now on, so I'm content... ;o) Please continue soon!
person gillie
schedule January 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
How can something so incredibly sad, be so compelling to read? Fantastic read. Thank you so much for the update!
person Shivawn
schedule January 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really hope you update soon because I absolutely LOVE this story! :D
person scorpio
schedule January 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I dont understand. Devin was captured just like his nephew and made to be a pet! Why would he do that to him?
person kiix
schedule January 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
egads. Why doesn't he slam his head against the wall? I doubt he would recognize freedom if it came prepacked in a shiny red bow....you are so mean. Nice.
schedule January 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
=( Poor poor Devin... I love that name btw... >< I can't believe that put him in a trunk! I mean, can't they see how wounded he is?! Gah! That "Keeran" dude needs to be kicked in the head! *stomps around angrily*
lol Awesome action-packed update ^_^ I LOOOOVE IT!!!!! At first, I didn't think I could handle the story with all its depressing/gorey/hurtful moments, but now that things have changed for Devin I'm getting really excited about the next updates to come! =D Update whenever you can mate!
person wynja
schedule January 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG what a turn! I'm crazy-happy with it, though, even though I suspect all won't be a dance on roses form now on anyway... (Is dancing on roses really that great? Dosen't those have thorns?) Anyway, great job! Can't wait to read more of this and Nemo... Evil addict-creator... ;o)

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