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for Forgotten

by traxie

person DH
schedule February 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. I feel so bad for Devin. Can't wait to see good things happening for him. But one question, is this an alternate universe with no STDs because no one seems to be worrying about it? **eagerly waiting for new chappies**
schedule February 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Awwwwww, I love "Snake" ^_^ Even when he's try to be all tough and uncaring, he shows his soft side! Atleast Devin has someone who cares at least a little...
LOVED the update mate! =D Update again sometime soonish? XD lol I can beg =P
person js
schedule February 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I feel so sorry for him...I hope his situation changes soon.
person BennyPeace
schedule February 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Aww.
person mashael
schedule February 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
omg!! poor baby~
i wish he would find happeness soon
schedule February 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I hope that bastard titled "Master" feels like SHIT now! What an absolute asshole! "Snake" Joey is starting to warm up to him, isn't he? I'm glad about that atleast...
XD I NEEDS HAPPINESS FOR THIS POOR WITTLE DUDE!!!! Update again? Please? lol
schedule February 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I am now officially addicted to your story. It's so heartbreaking, but amazing. I feel so bad for him, and can't wait for his life to pick up. I can't wait for more, I think this is even more heart breaking that your Pain story.
Until your next update,
Jades
person Anon
schedule February 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG! stop it, ur making me cry dammit =[ poor Devin. This is a very good story - I just read all 8 chapters in one go and now I'm feeling withdrawal =P will keep checking for ur next chapter - hope ur school and work is less hectic and ur loud neighbors only keep u up some of the time ^>^
person wynja
schedule February 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh, damn... for the first part of the chapter I thought efterything was getting better for the kid, but noooooo ;o) Oh, I had to look up the snake and it's beautiful! I've never seen or heard about that kind of snake before...
person J42
schedule February 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Another poignant scene -- poor guy. Hope he's going to get some reprieve soon.

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