rate_review Reviews

i like this story :)
but for the last couple chapters, it seems like it's very uneventful-- there's not much progression in the story. just more angst.

I just LOVE this fanfic! LOVE IT!!!! I feel sad reading it, but still, its amazing, and there no way in hell I will stop reading it. I'm addicted to it @_@ XD I have read some chapters twice because I just love it! I love the way you write also, its really really good!

I cannot wait for more!!

I really love this story. I feel so depressed for Devin because he has been so thoroughly broken and yet he is still trying so hard to please. My heart keeps looking for little sliver of hope for him. Your writing is excellent. I started the story last night and I could not wait to get home to finish reading. So this greedy reader says "Please Please update the story soon because it is hard to leave poor Devin literally hanging in the balance.

omg, i seriously love this story! I really hope you update soon, XD I also really hope it isn't so dark for too much longer, I want someone to finally have a fucking heart and realize that none of this is his fault! lol this story makes me emotional O_OXD

Wonder why no one ever looked for him ever- why doesnt Keeran want Ronan to see him? Because he might find out he was wrong?
Is he about to die from another creepy master - who is going to realize he is being held and who is going to help him save himself

Ok...I'll admit it. You have me hooked!
More please...

At least he won't be cold for now...I guess that is a little hope for him...but I wonder where his will to live comes from...it would seem that one might give up after everything he has been through but he seems to have some inner strength that is helping him survive...he must be a strong person even though he appears to be weakened from everything that has happened to him...great chapter...can't wait for more!

After your author notes I was worried that things were going to get much worse. I hate that he has given up. No longer living, just subsisting. I am so happy he got his blanket back. Being hungry was bad enough, but cold also?? What does this new master plan to do??? So many questions, waiting for answers. Keep up the great work.

ah ! Some tiny bits of humanity...tiny bits but that's a start uh ? I wish we knew more about the characters.It's a little bit frustrating not knowing who these men are,why they're acting this way.Great update !

So amazing! I love this story! It's one of my favorites on AFF right now. I can't wait for more, I feel so bad for Devin :(
Are you planning on this being a longer story or a shorter one? I was just wondering since you have the other story in progress to :)
Until your next update,
Jades

You made a review on my one story a while ago, I forgot to say last time. I am not giving up on my stories, I am actually working pretty hard on them. I had a beta who was supposed to be helping me with my stories, and I found out that she was correcting them and then posting them as hers under a different name. I only found out because she was telling people I stole them from her. I don't have a lot of time to write, but I am working on Another Chance to Live, and will probably update that one more than the other because I have fewer mess ups and my story is all laid out for me.

Thanks :D Jades