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CHAPTER TEN

I found Keeran's behaviour in this chapter extremely cruel and twisted....yummy, lol. I think it was really sweet of Snake to try and give Devin some small semblence of freedom, even though when reading it I knew it was all going to backfire on the poor boy.

Only one thing to mention that caught my eye, and that was the sudden introduction of not only a small wardrobe into Devin's room, but also clothes! Surely, if he'd just spent weeks in there, he would have either mentioned the wardrobe before or...at least have taken a peek inside and see the clothes? I know I would have explored every single inch of a room out of sheer boredom, if I were encaged like him. Perhaps it would have been better to simply have Snake bring clothes into the room for the boy to wear? Perhaps, knowing Ronan was away for the day, he could simply have borrowed some of the younger boys stuff, seeing as how Devin is so skinny and would possibly fit into them? And besides, what harm would ill fitting clothes be for a hour alone out in the sun?

Love the cliff hanger ending...poor Devin chained up naked and awaiting lord only knows what. Eagerly moving onto the new chapter I see you just posted to find out what it is, lol.

CHAPTER ELEVEN

Ah, now we're coming to the juicy master/slave relationship. And it's starting off well, for me at least lol.

I do feel sorry for Devin though, trapped in that small room, with nothing to do and now no one to see or even chat to. He can't even talk to the bare walls now that he has been so cruelly gagged.

I think I would have been driven insane by now, with the lack of anything to occupy my mind. He's not even got the joy of a see-throughable window to stare at the passing clouds, to break up the monotony of his new life.

We just have to hope that Keeran soon comes to realise that Devin played no part in hurting his cousin, Ronan, and sets him free. But not too soon, eh...Lol.

I love your stories - fell in love with 'Pain and Pain' and now 'Forgotten'. I hope you take this as a compliment when I say you write a great torture story. The poor boy in your latest 'Forgotten' I didn't think someones life could suck worse then Jason's did in 'Pain and Pain' but you had to top yourself did you. I really want his new "master" to get a slap in the face feeling, I wonder if he knows what Devin was to his enemy?

Dang! That was an awesome chapter! I am paralyzed with fear for poor Devin. His new master is really starting to enjoy having his own sex slave. I hope he doesn't turn out to be crazier than the first master. i am really enjoying this story.

I love your stories, I wish you would update more than once a week! I don't find your chapters are slow at all, the build up is great. I can't help comparing it to your last story and trying to figure out who the main character will end up with. K is great as a master and all...maybe a little confusing too, but he's mean so I don't think he'll be the one to save him.

Dear!!! I love this story too much and would like to read more. I feel the pleasure between both of men. and would like to konw the conclusion of this master-slave realtionship. I just predict that finally Keeran fall for this one....Hope Devin will be happy at last. Supporting you forever...

Ok...haven't posted until now because I tend to be a silent reader but this is getting to be too much even for me. I read your other story and although I found it well written and well constructed I actually had a hard time finishing it.

I'm afraid I may not be able to wait this one out. I've noticed two things about animals per say, even the human animal......when being threatened one of two things tends to happen, either you fight or you take flight. I understand that Devin has been in an abusive master/slave scene for quite some time but come on...he SHOULD quite frankly be dead and if not dead he SHOULD be looking to try to escape and if too weak he SHOULD be down right rabid mad with madness/anger. He is after all human so how much more torture can he take before he goes ape sh$$ and starts biting off some indiscriminate body parts because by this point of his existence death at the very least offers peace.

Thank you, thank you, thank you for the updates! I really enjoy your writing. After the last time I read these I went on a binge and read all the chapters of your first story in two days - I didn't sleep much between work and reading, but it was worth it! You sure do like to put these lovelies through the ringer, but what doesn't kill us makes us stronger (but thank you for the happy endings, I also love them too ^.^) I can't decide if I like Keeran or not - he reminds me a little bit of one of my favorite characters on a soap my friends and I watch, but he's a little scary 0_0, which makes this all the more interesting and addicting of course, lol. I will wait and see, I promise to be patient *cross my heart* but can't wait for the next lovely chappie! Now I'm off to binge on your Nemo story =^.^=

is the worst really ready to happen ? It seems to me that the master has showed a little bit of interests...or maybe I've just been fooled because this chapter has been more "gentle" and this rays of sun have warmed me as well.It always hurts so much to read this story...update soon !

wow I hope his new master will finally take better care of him. I would like that. anything better then ignoring him, I think that will finally break him... well please update soon!!!