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for Forgotten

by traxie

person miles
schedule May 5, 2013 at 12:00 AM
OMG! Updaaate ! I'm so happy ! You made my day !

And you just return to torture the poor boy...
Keeran, come and save him !!

Just one more chapter, yet ? So sad ! But I can't wait ! :)

I hope RL is good with you...
person Anon
schedule May 5, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Yeah!!! You updated!!!

Hate the Angst in this chapter. I was really hoping Master Gennarelli was dead. Devin was just starting to improve so much and coming out of his shell. I am glad that Snake saw Devin being kidnapped. Hopefully Keeran and Joey can rescue him before he is too far damaged again. I wonder if you have introduced the "traitor" in Keeran house in previous chapters or if he will be someone new. Either way I don't think he will live long once Keeran and Joey find out.

I hope they kill off Master Gennarelli this time.
person Misakixusagi
schedule May 5, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Holy shit i thought i was seeing things wen i saw this update lol glad to read another chapter, om g so scared at whats gonna happen.... Poor devin!
person Error
schedule May 5, 2013 at 12:00 AM
omg o_o the chills...just when everything was looking up for Devin too :o (D:< CURSE THE TRAITOR RAWR)
Can't wait for the epilogue!!! Update soooon xD hahahah
person Angela
schedule May 5, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I didnt think you would keeo the story going thank you so much !!!!! And please go on it is really a great story !!
person linika
schedule May 5, 2013 at 12:00 AM
so, you give us an update and end it like that? My, you really are evil!! :D
person Roya7777
schedule May 5, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Ohhh noooo!!! Not him again! and just when things were getting better for poor Devin! I do hope that Snake would have followed them ...

Pleaseeeee update soon! This is the worst cliffy ever! :P

Thanks again for not leaving this story unfinished ^_^
person Kinsfang
schedule May 5, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Thank you, thank you, thank you! I missed this story soooo much! It's good to have you back! I'm really excited (and saddened) to see that the end is near. I'll wait as long as it takes and please know I'm sending lots of ehugs your way.
person kiki
schedule May 5, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Is it possible for Devin to find out where he's from? like his last name?

Also I hope Snake (Joey) isn't the spy too!
person venos
schedule May 3, 2013 at 12:00 AM
i just finish ch4 and i realy hope very soon this sadis ....>^<....DIED JUST DEAD
im so angry i like romac lovely dovly..