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March 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I just saw your story. Read all chapters. Hehe.
Keep going is very good.
My only hope is that his new Master will care soon for him.
Keep going is very good.
My only hope is that his new Master will care soon for him.
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March 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ouch... well, hopefully Snake will share the "indifferent"-information, and MAYBE it will have SOME impact... I'm still not very clear about the man's motives for the abuse, other than some twisted revenge, but that actually makes the situation so much scarier!
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March 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
What a wicked story. More please!
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March 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love this story so much! Keep writing, :D ey
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March 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Thanks for the update! Poor Devin is so confused. He and Keeran are confusing the hell out of each other. I just want Devin to find some happiness or even a ray of hope. I also wonder what is going through Keeran's head. I get the feeling that he doesn't know what he wants from Devin either. I am so so eager to read more.
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March 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Phew. This is really absorbing, you do angst really well. I do hope that Devin gets his happy ending though, poor guy! Some fluff to go with that angst? :-) :-)
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March 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Aww. Poor Devin. I love him! It's so sad. I love this story so much, and every time I see it being updated I get so excited, even though I know its probably just another depressing chapter filled with angst. Not that I don't love it, but still.....
I can't wait for more! I love Snake/Joey by the way, he's an awesome character :D
Until your next update,
Jadesy
I can't wait for more! I love Snake/Joey by the way, he's an awesome character :D
Until your next update,
Jadesy
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March 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really love this story. It is so intense. Please update it soon!
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March 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh. My. God. I loved this! I never say that about a story. I never just rave in my review. This is the first time I have broken either of those rules. This is one of the best I have read.I am very anxious for a new chapter. I don't mind if it takes you months to update, just don't abandon Forgotten. Please.
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March 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh my goodness! I cannot get this story out of my mind! It is so sinfully naughty. I can't wait to read more of Devin's encounters with his master. Maybe he can warm up his cold heart a little. This story is so good!