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Hi traxie,

I hope you are better and doing fine! I really really missed you! I have read Forgotten 5 times already and I think I know it word by word, by heart! Gushhh, I'm in love with this story! ^^

Just a big "THANK YOU"!!! you made my day and I'm on my way to read the chapter for the third time! especially this chapter! it really plays with my emotions!!!

and I was wondering, maybe hoping that Keeran might be the one to save Devin! O.o before I was thinking about snake! but mean while that he cares for Devin, he is more like a father! I'm beginning to like Keeran! :P and I hope he keep up the nice treatment! some how I think to make Devin like a normal kid, is a big challenge and I don't know if Keeran wants to take the challenge or not!

hoom, can you tell me how old Keeran is?!

Well, I had been really really waiting for a chapter that Devin fall sick and I was dreaming of how it would flt like for Keeran or snake to take care of him! maybe some thing more intense and more serious! some thing life threatening! but any how, this chapter was really delicious! :D

Thank you very much! xoxo

oh BTW this is my email address, please add me to your mailing list!

roya7777 at yahoo dot ca

Thanks again

Roya

ps:

please please update soon! *.*

So, today I watched an episode of the Tudors, and there was this horrific torture/murder scene where a man was put to death by having a hot iron rod shoved up his anus and effectively spearing his entire body; truth be told, I wasn't expecting the scene and it totally fucked me up today haha And then I you updated your story which ALWAYS manages to take my breath away and make me cry, so write now I'm a total wreck haha You are such a powerful writer!!! Incase I've never made that clear, I just wanted you to know that. Also, I hope you are feeling better! sorry for your trip to the hospital.Hopefully it wasn't the swine flue : ( anyways, thanks for the update!! and stay away from that episode of the Tudors (season three I think lol)...gah, it was horrible!!

I love the story. I wonder about one thing : was not it obvious that Devin was as much the victim than Ronan? I would love to know why the master is so hard, and what he think. But still I love the story. I hope you update soon.
Bye
M

there are some pogress after all ! Or maybe that's what I want to think...I can't help but to wait for something to happen, anything...there are no answers and I feel for the boy who is so broken.There are little sparks of life in him with this last chapter.*crossed fingers*

I missed this! Sorry to hear you were sick, glad you are feeling better! I miss Nemo too, I must say, but, damn, it would be horrible to put any MORE pressure on you!

Traxie Good to here. that your feeling better. I hope it wasn't something to serious.

This chapter was very worth the wait. Poor Devin getting sick of all the abuse. But it looks like his master is starting to fall for him a little bit. Maybe Now he he will get better treatment. I have a few question though. Why didn't the nephew Rowan? Ryan? ( sorry can't remember his name) tell his uncle about devin? That Devin was abused too. does his uncle just not care cause he need some one to blame and poor Devin is the only one available cause his team killed all everyone else? Will you let the boy see the outside again? That chapter was so sad.

Well i will be waiting as patiently as possible fro your next chapter.
Thanks for sharing and not giving up on this story.

Great new chapter. I love to see the conflicting interactions between Keeran and Devin. Keeran is unable to stay away even when Devin is supposed to be off limits. This story really pulls at my heart strings because I want someone to finally cherish and take care of Devin. I hope he and Keeran can finally find some kind of peace with each other. Keep up the good writing.

Hey
please keep writing this story!!!
i love it and really want to know what happens :)

Hm...i don`t know,but this story makes me really sad.The poor devin,from one hell to another.
I hope he can somehow escape from that cruel bastard!
Please update soon!Jules

Oh,and i hate keeran and i wish him to suffer and die...:)

Yay! Thank you for another chapter! I've been so curious as to what was happening, and now I'm even more curious ^.^ Hope your move and job search go well!