rate_review Reviews

Realy good moment of transformation of feling of the master.

Is it possible to love this story more than
Pain and Pain?! I don't know! But I do!!!! HA!

You really get into the subjugated mentality!!!
This kid is just treading water and he really needs
a life preserver!!!

Thanks!
R

It's taken me the better part of the week but I've finally gotten through this story and in the process completely fallen for Devin :) The poor boy has just been through so much and it's amazing he's still able to function at all but I certainly have hope he'll be able to survive all this. Then of course there's Snake who I adore because it's becoming very obvious that despite who he works for he's a rather nice guy. Actually I have to say that more than once I wished that Keiran hadn't taken an interest in Devin and Snake could have had him for his own, it's a nice thought even if not necessarily realistic. Keiran's the only guy at this point that I'm not sure if I like or hate, it seems to fluctuate with what he's doing. At this point I would be happy if he just realized that being a master isn't just about doing what you want whenever you want, it's a lot more involved with a lot of responsibility like not giving out punishment without a clear reason/explanation. That's probably the most frustrating thing, he needs to realize that Devin isn't a normal guy and can't be expected to interact like one.
I know I've really rambled on but it's a great story, I enjoyed reading it :) Although I'm actually glad that I found this now instead of earlier, I don't know if I would have been able to read this one chapter at a time. As it is now I'm already stressing over what's going to happen next chapter but I'm looking forward to it all the same ^_^

Hey, I hope everything is going ok and you are feeling better! Being sick is never fun, let alone bad enough to be in the hospital. I was so excited to see that you had updated! I really enjoy this story and Devin is such a lovable character. I hope you feel better and keep up the good work!
Cloudyseph

dont get me wrong, the story is good but I dont think i could finish reading this if it dont get better for Devin. Its just cruel to have him living that way for the entire story.

Hi, glad to hear that you're feeling better. *Hands you a cookie*
As much as I love your story, I don't know if my heart can take it. My eyes literally watered when reading this. I'll hand in there for the ride. But PLEASE, let Devin have someone to care for him, treat him with love. I think Kieran feels something for him, just wished that it helped decrease the amount of pain he dishes out to poor Devin.

Awwwww... Am I morbid for thinking that last bit was cute? I mean, Keeran (or Master) isn't usually that gentle and kind, so I can't help but feel like he's starting to have feelings for Devin. *bounces* I REALLY REALLY hope so!!!!! XD I need happiness amidst all this sadness lol
Great update mate, and dun worry about taking so long ^_^ You just concentrate on what you can do and feel better!

I'm so glad you're back and I hope you're feeling better! Your story is as great as ever, I just about cried at the beginning when Devin got all worried for not finishing his food. I can't wait for more.

This story is just so heartbreaking. You write Devin's thoughts very well and I often cry along with him. Well, his master finally seems to be coming along so we'll see how that goes.

glad to hear you are doing better...and thanks for the update...such a sad story but definitely good and interesting...thanks for continuing with it and sharing it here...take care of yourself...and i look forward to your next update.