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huhu,
I still want to strangle Keeran.So he has now guess...pöh.
He is such an ass,sleeping(raping)with Devin,when he is ill and nearly dead.
Poor Devin,it`s really sad,the way he is looking at the window...
Couldn`t Ronan help him to escape?
Please update soon,Jules
PS:Call them Ren and Stimpy...:)

Dude... This story is really freaking depressing... I'm just happy that the main
character is being treated well.

Wow, just got done reading chapter 14... This story is really good yo!
I just hope the main character gets a better treatment soon.
Please update soon! I really really really want to know what happens
next!!!

SQUWEEEEEE!!!!!! =D I'm SO happy that things are getting better for poor Devin ^_^ Keeran is actually become much nicer and I hope he keeps going that route, cuz Devin is so sweet and adorable, even if he is skittish. THANK YOU for the email telling me about your update! It helps ^^ Update whenever you can, and for your kitties... hrm... I'd name 'em after you tortured characters, but that's just me XD Your name choices sound awesome too!

Thank you for updating. I know it's late...very late, but I'm glad you're feeling better. To be honest, I don't know if this is the right story for me. The amount of abuse Devin continues to be put through, distrubs me. Some abuse/angst is fine. But I guess, I love happy endings. Unless something changes, I can't see that for Devin. And that hurts. Even when obviously ill, Kieran won't let him be. One could say it's evidence of an obcession. Yet, I wish he could control himself enough to let Devin heal.

You're writing is excellent. Again thanks.

wonderrful i hope u update soon

O wow! Well I'm glad to see that the main character is finally getting a break! Maybe Master will be more kind and understanding in the next chapter!

I read your story but didn't take the time to comment before...I'm sorry, I'm really a bad girl :( loll

I really like Devin, poor little child (I know he's 18 but he don't have the maturity of an adult)
How he reacts to what he believes to be normal, to have earned, it's to sad. His judgement's completely distorted by his experiences.

I didn't have a good impression about the Master but the chapter 13 make me really hate him. Devin's almost death and he have sex with him.....really low, really!!! The Master merit that someone make him experience the same life of Devin, make him suffer for that he can understand what he do to Devin or the other slave (i'm suppose he have other?!). This kind of guy seems to think that it's easy to be sub and be tortured like this!
Chapter14, don't really make it better!

But i like to hate him!!! lolll It's because you're a good author!! :)
Gwen
P.s. English not my mother tongue, sorry for the faults.

Ahhhh, some kindness at last. Still some major non-con going on but a little bit of moonlight does wonders.

Okay, kitten naming time, smudge and pascale. Don't know, just like them. As I am known for strange names former kitties, Pizza and Aku, former dog, Armand and current muttela - Naoe. Let their personalities guide you. Just not Fluffy and Tigger *shudder*

I want moreeeee! T.T I'm begging you please update soon! I'm dying to read the rest and it just not enough! :((

Keeran , Keeran ... he doesn't know what he is doing as well! hugging Devin and sleeping with him! :P I wish I could have meet Keeran! how old is he by the way! and doesn't he want to change Devin's room?! some room with a real window in the wall! below enough to watch out side!

If I were Devin ... what do I want to say? went depressed?! O.o well with every thing he went through it's good that he is not crazy! depressed is nothing! but I really expect Keeran to do something! if he wants to keep Devin! Devin wouldn't last long like this! so please make him do something! :D

lol I talked to much again! :P just please update soon! with the sun above and every thing, I'm sure you can do it!

your loyal reader! ;)