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PLEASE, PLEASE let the reason for Devin's move be for his comfort and enjoyment. Devin's panicked flight from the garden and his fear of punishment, actually made my eyes water. Damn Kieran, getting angry at Devin's fear of him. I feel that the anger was self-directed, and rightly so. As much as I try to find good in him, and hope for him, I dislike him. His treatment of Devin has been deplorable. And now, he confusing poor Devin with the gentle/angry mood swings.

Maybe my poor brain has been rotted by too many chic flicks. But I hope you believe in happy endings. Your writing has inspired me to care about Devin. I hope that one day he does get to live in sunshine, instead of fear.

Almost 20 days! :(

I want chapter 15 *.* pleaseeeeee u.u

this is an excellent story and I can't wait for more. I love the reality of the story and Devin's reactions.

I used to love the banana medicine when I was a kid, it's so weird that he hates it! Cute too that Keeran called him raspberry. It's so random as a nickname.

Keeran is an a**. Hope something bad and painful happens to him soon as his punishment ^^.

Im really enjoying this fic but feeling a bit sorry for poor Devin. Any chance of a bit of happiness for him soon? xxx

WOW really great story....just started reading...very intense.... I think it´s time something good should happen to Devin...

Yes! Another chapter. I just can't get enough of this; I must have read this story ten times already. I love the development and reading your stories always make me feel like crying for the characters. K. is so confusing - suddenly being nice and I get the feeling he forgets half the stuff he says to D. For example, "I don't help for free". I get the impression he wouldn't have thought of that when helping D. out in the shower this time. He's still threatening but kinda sweet too. I suppose no one can resist being nice to a sick patient. I'm glad for it though, because I think once K. gets to talking with him and learns about what D.'s been through he'll be more understanding and less of an ass. I can't wait to read further development. I try not to say this to people because I don't want to pressure, but please update soon!

oh ye, I just saw Kiix review and remember I forgot about the kitten names!

well, in my own language (Persian) Maloos and Pishi are famous and cute names for kitties. Also if he is very nutty Rax! :P My neighbor's cat name is Duwy too!

I'll think of more names for next time! ;)

Q: which one do you like more? banana or raspberry? :D

I love it. I thought it was hilarious how Doctor Tobih called Keeran in and yelled at Keeran for sleeping with Devin again. Keeran can't stay away. He obviously really likes having Devin as a pet. However, it is interesting that he wants to know what Devin is thinking and then notes how Devin is afraid of him. No wonder poor Devin is confused. It would be easy to get his heart shattered into a million pieces if he started to trust in Keeran. So I am very excited to see what happens and thank you for updating. When I see this story posted I drop everything else. I would love to see a picture of your kittens.