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by traxie

person Diz
schedule June 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Please update again soon! I just stayed up really late reading this whole story because I got so addicted. I love H/C! And I can't wait to read more! Devin is too cute and I feel bad for him, but I think Kearan is a good guy. Update sooN!!!! PLEASE!
person JulesGer
schedule June 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
huhu,
an awesome chapter...
poor Devin,it`s not his fault that he reacts the way he does,
no one even trys to explain him anything.
I knew that he would be paralysed,when Snake took him to the garden.
I thought,that Keeran is smart...asking Devin what is wrong...
I want to give him a good smack to the head,maybe then he reminds himself of the
brutal beating he gave Devin...
And I don`t know if I`m totally wrong,but I get the feeling,that Snake feels something
for Devin..hm.
Hope you update soon,Jules
schedule June 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
=( Poor Devin! Keeran really needs to understand why he acts the way he does... The poor boy doesn't want to make Keeran mad, he's just used to being treated like a slave rather than a person... And I really feel sorry for him for thinking that "Snake" wants his body too, though it's obvious to me that he doesn't...

*bounces* GAH I WANTS MORE!!! XD But I'll be good... *rocks back and forth in corner* lol
person kinbo
schedule June 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG! i love this story it's really good i just read the whole thing in one day and i love it!
it's really cute and sad how Devin doesn't realize that they're just trying to be nice to him
anyway please update soon!! ^_^
person kylee
schedule June 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
AA nicer more comfy bedroom. Could it be that Keeran is feeling a little more generous with Devin? It is hard when no one tells Devin anything. I am so sorry for Devin in his terrified state. After being a pet for so long Keeran and Snake need to tell Devin what is going on instead of leaving the poor thing to assume things.
schedule June 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
What irritates me the most is that it can take days to write and only seconds to read -_-
I'm seriously loving the story but it's agony waiting for more updates.
Update soon if possible!
Lyoni
person AO
schedule June 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! XD This chapter was awesome, It's about time things started to turn around! At least, I think they are.. :) Hehe, i can't wait for the next update.
person Itchan
schedule June 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I have been reading this fic since chapter 8 was released. Sorry I haven't review :/

I F***ING LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!!!! (I don't know if I'm allow to say that or not :S so I used *) I really can't say it any other way. I'm just addicted to it!! @_@ The story is so sad, but I just get so happy when a new chapter comes X3 Its one of my favorite stories. And I really can't wait to see what more happens to Devin. I see Keeran is falling in love (maybe? O_o?) with Devin and gets mad when Devin shows him fear, or other feelings that Keeran doesn't want Devin to feel towards him. (I'm bad at explaining stuff :( ) And thats great!! It makes the story better. :D

Until next chapter then! :)
person Rosei
schedule June 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
T!

Thanks for updating!
Devin's so smart, but no one talks to him ahead of time!!!!
So, they're so dumb!!!!

Kerran should be pissed!!! AT HIMSELF!!!! For not giving any
consideration to the kids mental state!! A state that he promoted!!!

HA!!! But you know that, 'cause you wrote it!!!!!

Thank you!!! I love this story!!!
R
person gillie
schedule June 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yet another most excellent chapter!!! Even when your life is so busy you still write like an angel!