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update soon, you're killing me with this wait

OK, here is one prediction:

as Snake came in, Devin will go to him to start servicing him! As shocking it was for Snake, it take him a while to react to Devin's act.
Meanwhile, the door will open and Keeran enter the room, seeing these two together! Couldn't think of anything else, he think the very misunderstanding! In his fury he beat Devin again ... with Devin still recovering from last beating, he couldn't take too much of this and ...

Snake could finally stop Keeran and call for the doctor , ...

Later on that they figure out the whole misunderstanding, Keeran feeling remorse and all, attend to Devin, a very panicked Devin and ...


Well, something like this, with details of course! lol

I'm ruining your story! So you better update soon! :D really it's about a month and a half! :( please update! *.*

R

Almost a month!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! T.T (crying out loud)

Pleaseeee update =(^.^)= please!

Please update soon, you're killing me with this wait! I'm dying to find out what's going to happen between Snake and Devin. I mean the poor kid thinks his caretaker is there for sex and that obviously wouldn't happen...right!?

2 weeks?! 3 weeks ... T.T

I went through the whole story for 20th time?! I guess so! I lost the count! :P

Please do have some mercy! I'm dying without Keeran and Raspberry! :D no kidding! I really live with them especially at nights and I'm already through 3 different scenarios and continue the story in my mind!

Well update and let me see how much our minds are alike! *.*

and I certainly want to beat Snake for not saying: "this is your new room!" was it so hard to tell the poor child this simple sentence?! ohhh >.<

Ye I know, this is not a review but I thought maybe rambling stuff and bug you all the time :P, might encourage you to update sooner! ^_^

Before you kill me ... Ja ne ;)

R

YES!!! I was gone for a time and come back to find three chapters - have I mentioned that I love you!! Thank you, thank you, thank you *grovels and kisses your feet* hehe I really love where you're going with Keeran and Dev. I love a good strong paring and Dev's new nickname is KAWAII - I could just eat that cute little raspberry right up! Hope all is going superbly with you and thanks again for this yummy story =^.^=

like the new chapter ^^
waiting for more~

I wonder if K. regrets now having whipped him in the first place. He seems like he's getting a lot nicer. Funny though that Snake seems to be getting meaner - or more impatient in any case. Given he's talked to D. the most and would understand him better than anyone else you would think he'd be trynig to help him out a little not distancing from him. I still love the story and anxiously await the next update.

(15) I'm kind of hoping that this is going to be at least somewhat of a good change for Devin, I mean at least Keeran is trying, although I still think he needs a course on how to be a proper master and what that all entails. It's like he wants to treat Devin like little more than a slave but have him act like a regular guy. I can't wait to see what happens next, it's definitely an interesting story :)

Ohhhh, I can't believe you leave us at this point! The worst hangy I have ever had!!! :((

Now me and my twisted crazy mind will go through a hundred different scenarios until you update again! Devin tries to service Snake and suddenly Keeran comes in! A huge misunderstanding! or maybe Snake snaps at him hard or ... Ohhhh why would you do this????!!!! at least please please please update soon! 20 days is toooo long for me to wait! :P

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and I think Keeran and Snake should better start explaining things for Devin otherwise, Devin's mind would assume the 180 degree opposite! @.@

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and by Gods, why Keeran is angry?! Couldn't he understand how much Devin's mind is twisted and the poor kid couldn't help and be afraid of him?!

I think he has to try harder not to frighten Devin this much! Kindness alone won't heal his damage personality! :(

Well, considering he is still thinking about Devin and tries to make thing better by giving him a new room and stuff, I think he is on the right track but still ...

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sigh

OK, last thing I want to mention: I finished reading this chapter for the third time (Ain't I enjoying myself?! :D ) and I was totally sensing, feeling every moment of the story with Devin! You are such a powerful writer! *.* You couldn't have written this chapter any better! it was awsome! ;)

Thank you and ... please update soon! ^_^

ps:

That was me asking about Raspberry! :P